The Beach

AliAli Posts: 2,621
(This is what happened...
I jump in my car
White box,almost overheating
"Don't go on me"
should be playing in the background.
I jump on Hand Avenue
smoking the whole way
and I cross over the Parkway
on my way to Stone Harbor.
Passing the bar,passing the pizza dock,
passing the 5 & dime,passing city hall,
I make a right.
On my way down Dune Drive
into the parking lot of
my favorite beach spot.)




The Beach

Bodies lay languid,
brains dormant,
without a thought
except to
soak up the sun
read a book
catch a wave
throw a frisbee
swim in the ocean.
A plane goes by-
you know-
the ones with
the signs on the back of them
"Play the Lotto"
It flaps and flies in the wind.
Children building sandcastles
with toys
their parents can't put together
and
Parents with umbrellas-
their children can't sit still underneath of them.
A young couple walks by
holding hands
while
another couple is
sensually applying sunscreen
to his darlings back.
The jellyfish are miles away,
the starfish-
clinging to a rock,
and I,
am just
laid out,
watching it all pass by.
God,
I love the beach.

adv
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005

"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"

PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    superb...your style continues to change...it is exhilarating....
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  • Anna_falkAnna_falk Posts: 114
    I love beaches, you made me wish I was there. :)
    To worry about tomorrow doesn't make it easier,
    it only makes today worse.
  • The picture is painted in my head...I wish I was there..
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Thanks you guys for the compliments...
    (you know I'm really grateful to Pearl Jam for this being a poetry springboard
    for new poets.I will continue to shower thenm with affection:)
    Sea and Kat are appreciated as well.....)

    I kinda like this poem and am always scouring the board for new styles....
    thanks for your input:)

    heart....

    ali:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • pearlmuttpearlmutt Posts: 392
    I'm with you Ali, good one. really really good one.
  • Very nice poem
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Thank you fellow writers:)
    I wish I had someone to Bullsh*it with on the board.....
    Its getting lonely at the top:);)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • :) Ah, zee beach! Best place to soak up some life! Very nice, Ali!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    :) Ah, zee beach! Best place to soak up some life! Very nice, Ali!
    Thanks BE.....
    Anyone up for some summer skinny dipping?;)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • Ali wrote:
    Thanks BE.....
    Anyone up for some summer skinny dipping?;)

    LOL! Yeah, but only at night. It's just more fun at night! :D

    (actually, it's just darker at night--makes it harder for anyone to REALLY see these unsightly thighs!!! Hee Hee! :p:p:D)

    WWWWHHHHHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!! *SPLASH* :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    LOL! Yeah, but only at night. It's just more fun at night! :D

    (actually, it's just darker at night--makes it harder for anyone to REALLY see these unsightly thighs!!! Hee Hee! :p:p:D)

    WWWWHHHHHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!! *SPLASH* :)

    OLLIE-OLLIE OXEN FREE!!!!!!!
    Now you have me craving a "Sex On The Beach"!
    .....OR.....The real thing:):):):):):):):):)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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