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Inner-Peace and Self-Doubt

AliAli Posts: 2,621
edited June 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
When the dawn came
A new feeling arose.
But I brought the old one back.
Frindships should last forever,
with mutual respect
without death-wish.
The clouds parted
and the seas rose
and I talked with God about my problems
and he said I was right.
Me being imperfect,
me being scarred,
me being lost,
me being broken.
All desolate nightmares and lies
of the coldhearted.
I can only close my eyes and wish
of a peaceful life for everyone,
without conflict or pain,
as the flowers bloom on the buds of the branch,
as we listen for the angels voices
on the wings of the wind.
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005

"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"

PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    I can only send my love to you,
    In shades of pink,
    In shades of blue.

    I could only send a sullen kiss,
    On a cheek,
    With sweetened bliss.

    I can scream up, into the night,
    With passion unfolding,
    In glorious height.

    I can give a soft,lonely cry,
    For life and death,
    To question why.

    The one thing i could give to you,
    Would be my lOve,
    It would be true.


    ADEV to HIM?!?!!!!!!!!
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
    such passionate words...once again.. very nice Ali
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    a poet wrote:
    such passionate words...once again.. very nice Ali
    Thanks once agian for your support,poet...youre the best......keep writing....:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Ali wrote:
    I can only send my love to you,
    In shades of pink,
    In shades of blue.

    I could only send a sullen kiss,
    On a cheek,
    With sweetened bliss.

    I can scream up, into the night,
    With passion unfolding,
    In glorious height.

    I can give a soft,lonely cry,
    For life and death,
    To question why.

    The one thing i could give to you,
    Would be my lOve,
    It would be true.


    ADEV to HIM?!?!!!!!!!!


    I need one-tenth of the passion you have, Ali.

    ps....i don't get that last line?
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  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    Ali....you're obviously happy....don't go looking for things.....
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    grooveamatic wrote:
    I need one-tenth of the passion you have, Ali.

    ps....i don't get that last line?

    Would be my love...
    It would be true.

    It would be a true love...no holds barred...if I could overturn every rock to find him,Groove!:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    ISN wrote:
    Ali....you're obviously happy....don't go looking for things.....
    I know I am...despite my horrid weekend...I feel the goodness that came out of it and the innocent truth and beauty of my childhood that I always wish to live has been found and rediscovered.Like living in Love's glow.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    no, I mean "ADEV to HIM"....what is that?
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    grooveamatic wrote:
    no, I mean "ADEV to HIM"....what is that?
    Whoever "HE" may be....
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Ali wrote:
    Whoever "HE" may be....

    what is "Adev"?
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    grooveamatic wrote:
    what is "Adev"?
    The initials to my name,silly:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Ali wrote:
    The initials to my name,silly:)

    aha! see, that was the whole confusion to me....i had no idea what that was (and geez, it was pulling teeth to get you to tell me!) :)

    love ya A!
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    grooveamatic wrote:
    aha! see, that was the whole confusion to me....i had no idea what that was (and geez, it was pulling teeth to get you to tell me!) :)

    love ya A!
    I love you too groove;):);):)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    I feel so warm and fuzzy.....
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    grooveamatic wrote:
    I feel so warm and fuzzy.....
    I think you feel warm and fuzzy too;)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Ali wrote:
    I think you feel warm and fuzzy too;)

    When did you get so funny? :):);)
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    grooveamatic wrote:
    When did you get so funny? :):);)
    General insanity...the willingness to gain acceptance.....Lithium......
    and thinking of Eddie Vedder singing.;)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Ali wrote:
    General insanity

    this is by far the most fun one....

    how are you today allison? your ": )" thread sounds rather depressed....
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    i am not depressed!I am an actress...I'm workin it!:)
    But thanks for sharin:)and carin:)

    Its just written about what they say about most bipolar people....
    which is not me...I'm just moody and elated and almost always on the high end of things unless I'm tired!


    But thank you for caring.
    I'm just incredibly talented:)(INSERT HIGH SELF ESTEEM HERE)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    You go girl!
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    grooveamatic wrote:
    You go girl!
    Yes...ali to save the day.....:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    I'm afraid I must go, A....errands are beckoning me. It was fantastic to see you! Call me! (fer real!)
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