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Random Thoughts.

AliAli Posts: 2,621
edited June 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Random Thoughts.


Thankful for you.
I used to wear perfume.
Mr. Squiggles was a toy.
At the gas station.
A beautiful boy.
I lie awake in bed at night.
Sun shines brightest at 4:30PM.
In two weeks I'll be at the shore.
I wonder when my prince will come.
Sitting in school was such a bore.
I walked to my car and turned it over.
Pleasant in tongue the auditioner was.
Well.... killing the president wouldnt be right.
The fly on the wall has a melodramatic attitude.
I have a friend ...she's losing her sight.

Random Thoughts.
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005

"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"

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  • NothingbetterNothingbetter Posts: 570
    Nice, freestyle writing.
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Thank you:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
    Love the ending Ali..."I have a friend...she's losing her sight"
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    I speak da truth,pOet....!:)
    Glad u liked :)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    I enjoyed this, esp. the pleasent in tongue line
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    random thoughts i like :)
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    john girl wrote:
    I enjoyed this, esp. the pleasent in tongue line
    Thank you JOhn girl....
    Thank God I have an audition coming up.I must study those lines:);):)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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