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III. & IV.

AliAli Posts: 2,621
edited June 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
III.

Glistening,
sugary sweet
his lips are golden
his spirit is calm
He echoes an aside
Before he speaks
Cautious and weary
of the road which he is to choose-
the road that lies ahead.
The grey elephant
brings his goodluck
in a middle eastern philosophers charm
but
he has no superstitions when it comes to God
and man.
Raising a fist is not his way,
but primary defense is not holding onto
an outward lie, either as
capturing an enemy means soon after
letting him go.
Waves encircle him
and on a sailboat to the carribean
we will someday sail and swim our days away
with the Equator's shining sun beaming down upon our bodies
as we lay arms entwined along the bow of Terpiscore.


IV.

Wine is best drunk
while doting upon love,
lust, and creation.
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005

"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"

PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    III makes me smile quite a bit.....
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  • Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
    love part IV..
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • even flow?even flow? Posts: 8,066
    Very enjoyable reading. But I think that IV needs to be revised to read: Wine is best drunk; whenever. ;) Especially red. Thanks for sharing Ali.
    You've changed your place in this world!
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    grooveamatic wrote:
    III makes me smile quite a bit.....
    I could say something really funny about your smiling groove......
    thank you for the compliment:):):):):):):):)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    even flow? wrote:
    Very enjoyable reading. But I think that IV needs to be revised to read: Wine is best drunk; whenever. ;) Especially red. Thanks for sharing Ali.

    I agre,,,red over whiite...I'm Italian in descent so....a Ruffino:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Ali wrote:
    I could say something really funny about your smiling groove......
    thank you for the compliment:):):):):):):):)

    I would like to know the funny thing, A....I suspect it is dirty...you can PM it to me... :)
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    aND i AM NEVER DIRTY....JUST UNTOUCHABLE.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Your Caps Lock is on.
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    i KNOW.I'M A SCREAMER.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Ali wrote:
    i KNOW.I'M A SCREAMER.


    I just blushed.
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    cOME ON....YOU?
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Ali wrote:
    cOME ON....YOU?

    Yes...even I can blush. Not often. But I do.
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Sorry...I thought it was funny.Completely opossite of my manners.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Ali wrote:
    Sorry...I thought it was funny.Completely opossite of my manners.

    Oh, it was funny...however, I admit to being bashful when it comes to other's reading our randy conversation. Just the public nature of it made me blush. You weren't out of line dear.
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    grooveamatic wrote:
    Oh, it was funny...however, I admit to being bashful when it comes to other's reading our randy conversation. Just the public nature of it made me blush. You weren't out of line dear.
    Groove..the cops took me home tonight.My "friend" thought I was drinking and driving .,only after I got him to his destination to stay I wasnt going to stick around....and got pissed...yanked the keys out of the car...and pleaded I was "Drunk" and needed to take my bipolar medication.I was pissed so I called the cops on him.They drove me home cause I told them he was a drug addict..whhich he is.Was is in the wrong ?Help me out here....I'm the victim all the time..yet I always lose a friend or two along the way.....
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Ali wrote:
    Groove..the cops took me home tonight.My "friend" thought I was drinking and driving .,only after I got him to his destination to stay I wasnt going to stick around....and got pissed...yanked the keys out of the car...and pleaded I was "Drunk" and needed to take my bipolar medication.I was pissed so I called the cops on him.They drove me home cause I told them he was a drug addict..whhich he is.Was is in the wrong ?Help me out here....I'm the victim all the time..yet I always lose a friend or two along the way.....

    hmmm....difficult situation dear. Hard to say what is right and wrong here. I'm very glad that you are OK, though, that is a very good thing. It is quite late & I am quite tired...too tired to think too much about this. I'll post more tommorow.

    Question: are you really losing 'friends'?

    Take care of yourself and don't feel too much guilt or remorse, k?

    miss ya,
    s
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Love ya dearly s......thanks...I just love broadcasting my life stories on the web for the government to read.....but people have to be warned...this could
    happen to you...becareful who your friends are.....PM me if u want....

    Miss Ali.....



    I cry at night in my sleep
    Friends with problems make me weep
    I'll probably be alone til the day I die
    Figuring out their alibi.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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