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AliAli Posts: 2,621
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Allison: I never wanted anyone but you...
since that conversation.

Why is it as soon as you feel youre falling in love,
an army of intruders try to rush into your gates?

I have pushed away my prosecuters...
and left my defense up....

If anyone believes me not...
May lightening strike them down.
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005

"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"

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  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    Wow! Who pissed you off?
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,265
    I've read a few of the poems on this thread today, and maybe as a group we should be a group of uncommitted single people. . . .Love is a GOOD thing, right!? What's up with all the heartache . . . geez, I'm getting knots in my stomach, and I'm not even the one breaking up.:D

    Ok, so for all of you going through a heartache, if you were the wicked witch of the west, what would you be doing right now?
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    i'd be baking pie, lol...

    metaphorically speaking

    like 1 - 2 - 3


    and then i'd take a nap :D



    oh... and i say... walk right into love... don't fall...
    odds are up on big hurt
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Bibliobella wrote:
    I've read a few of the poems on this thread today, and maybe as a group we should be a group of uncommitted single people. . . .Love is a GOOD thing, right!? What's up with all the heartache . . . geez, I'm getting knots in my stomach, and I'm not even the one breaking up.:D

    Ok, so for all of you going through a heartache, if you were the wicked witch of the west, what would you be doing right now?
    Bib....(and gallies)...

    I met the most amzing WAITER yesterday.He had this cute little soul patch on his chin...(I love those!!!!)...and he just totally flirted with me and now I sit and wonder why he didnt ask me for my #.WHAT A TEASE...
    I dont understand men.I mean..they say things and back away without a clue.Dont they realize we are human too.Maybe my stint as superwoman-balancing a part-time job,acting and writing, and trying to keep in some what decent appearance doesn't work.
    I'm becoming a stay -at- home -waste -of -a- person.Then I'll get some attention from the opposite sex.
    Poet...dont laugh at me either....

    Love you gallies!

    allison vigh
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    Ali wrote:
    Bib....(and gallies)...

    I met the most amzing WAITER yesterday.He had this cute little soul patch on his chin...(I love those!!!!)...and he just totally flirted with me and now I sit and wonder why he didnt ask me for my #.WHAT A TEASE...
    I dont understand men.I mean..they say things and back away without a clue.Dont they realize we are human too.Maybe my stint as superwoman-balancing a part-time job,acting and writing, and trying to keep in some what decent appearance doesn't work.
    I'm becoming a stay -at- home -waste -of -a- person.Then I'll get some attention from the opposite sex.
    Poet...dont laugh at me either....

    Love you gallies!

    allison vigh


    Ali-
    I speak as one who has been with the same man for 13 years that I don't think they will ever be entirely understood. Sometimes he still manages to amaze me and then alot of the time leaves me confused. I prefer the term "house hag" vs. stay-at-home-waste-of-a-person.
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    Ali wrote:
    Bib....(and gallies)...

    I met the most amzing WAITER yesterday.He had this cute little soul patch on his chin...(I love those!!!!)...and he just totally flirted with me and now I sit and wonder why he didnt ask me for my #.WHAT A TEASE...
    I dont understand men.I mean..they say things and back away without a clue.Dont they realize we are human too.Maybe my stint as superwoman-balancing a part-time job,acting and writing, and trying to keep in some what decent appearance doesn't work.
    I'm becoming a stay -at- home -waste -of -a- person.Then I'll get some attention from the opposite sex.
    Poet...dont laugh at me either....

    Love you gallies!

    allison vigh


    WOW, I get so sick of this. Why can't a woman, if she is interested in a guy, ask for his number, or make a move. Women don't seem to realize that every time a guy approaches a girl HE faces rejection. Most women are totally brush most guys off when they approach them. Now, I consider myself a prettty good guy. I am fairly respectful. I have a good job. I have made the odd person laugh. I am not a 'hunk', but im not fester. It sucks that it ussually me who has to make the first move. ESPECIALLY if you meet a girl at a lounge, because then she ussually thinks you are after a 'hook-up'.

    Women say they want equal treatment, and I feel that way to. Equal pay, promotion opprtunity, etc....but I also feel that is strait accross the board. You are interested in a guy, let him know....don't make us be the only ones sticking our necks out just to try to ask a woman out for a cup of coffe, yet face total rejection.

    sorry, ranting again

    KIR
    D
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    depopulationINC wrote:
    WOW, I get so sick of this. Why can't a woman, if she is interested in a guy, ask for his number, or make a move. Women don't seem to realize that every time a guy approaches a girl HE faces rejection. Most women are totally brush most guys off when they approach them. Now, I consider myself a prettty good guy. I am fairly respectful. I have a good job. I have made the odd person laugh. I am not a 'hunk', but im not fester. It sucks that it ussually me who has to make the first move. ESPECIALLY if you meet a girl at a lounge, because then she ussually thinks you are after a 'hook-up'.

    Women say they want equal treatment, and I feel that way to. Equal pay, promotion opprtunity, etc....but I also feel that is strait accross the board. You are interested in a guy, let him know....don't make us be the only ones sticking our necks out just to try to ask a woman out for a cup of coffe, yet face total rejection.

    sorry, ranting again

    KIR
    D


    You have a very good point Depop. Maybe some women are old fashioned and wait for the guy to approach. Some are too shy. Can't speak for all women, but those would be my two guesses. Maybe women take rejection a lot harder than guys (most women are more sensitive-not all, but alot of them). You do have a point though.
  • Pearl Jam and toastPearl Jam and toast Posts: 4,475
    that's pretty bleak ;)

    I just wanted to say that Lamented is one of my favorite words ever...

    ... Lamented and assured.. to the lights.. and towns.. below.. faster than.. the speed.. of sound... :)
    Come on pilgrim you know he loves you..

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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    depopulationINC wrote:
    WOW, I get so sick of this. Why can't a woman, if she is interested in a guy, ask for his number, or make a move. Women don't seem to realize that every time a guy approaches a girl HE faces rejection. Most women are totally brush most guys off when they approach them. Now, I consider myself a prettty good guy. I am fairly respectful. I have a good job. I have made the odd person laugh. I am not a 'hunk', but im not fester. It sucks that it ussually me who has to make the first move. ESPECIALLY if you meet a girl at a lounge, because then she ussually thinks you are after a 'hook-up'.

    Women say they want equal treatment, and I feel that way to. Equal pay, promotion opprtunity, etc....but I also feel that is strait accross the board. You are interested in a guy, let him know....don't make us be the only ones sticking our necks out just to try to ask a woman out for a cup of coffe, yet face total rejection.

    sorry, ranting again

    KIR
    D
    Believe me...I think it just goes around,INC.I dont take it personal.To be honest...the waiter was cool,,,but totally not my type.It wouldve probably only lasted in the bedroom!!!!NOt even!!!!!!!I currently have my eye on someone,would love to get to know them,and thats later down the road.I made my point to him and will hope someday to meet him.Just to meet and either be faced with the facts that He wants me or he doesnt.Its hard I guess...cuase you really have to know what you want and think about all things taken into "relationship perspective".Compatibility...etc.
    Dont worry my friend...I think well find them.
    allison vigh
    PS I was just venting too.No harm meant:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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