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Anticipation

AliAli Posts: 2,621
edited February 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Dawn echoes
the burning eclipse
As it masquerades
as twilight
while we partake
in our ressurrectional dance
of divine madness
bringing to life
unforsaken vows,
celebratory insights-
leaving young minds
laughing with brimming want.
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005

"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"

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  • soundgrungersoundgrunger Posts: 218
    i really like that--this part in particular, but all of it is nice. :)
    Ali wrote:
    Dawn echoes
    the burning eclipse
    As it masquerades
    as twilight
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    thanx soundGrunger...I like that part the best too...Its going into the chapbook.Or on a webpage.
    Thanx:):):):):):)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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