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AliAli Posts: 2,621
edited June 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
If it was once
It could be more
If it was death
It could conquer all
If it was you
It would be me
If you were mine
I would be yours.
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005

"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"

PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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  • kdpjamkdpjam Posts: 2,303
    short but great, ali...;)
    lay down all thoughts; surrender to the void
    ~it is shining it is shining~
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    kdpjam wrote:
    short but great, ali...;)
    Danka shane.
    The tribulations of love and what is to be awaits!!!!!!!!!!:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
    Short+simple=great poem

    Love this poem Ali!!!!!!!
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    If it is Ali,
    It's very sweet! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Childrens HourChildrens Hour Posts: 93
    Being Enlightened wrote:
    If it is Ali,
    It's very sweet! :)

    Yeah..!:)

    Like it a lot..
    :)
    ۞Je houdt niet van haar omdat ze bijzonder is, ze is bijzonder omdat ze van je houdt,
    ۞Liefde is niet dat waarop het uitloopt, maar dat waarmee het begint,
    ۞Er is liefde en je begint een relatie om te zien of zij daartegen bestand is.
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    chu guys are too sweet!:)
    So sweet...youre a lollipop!!!!!!!!!!!
    Glad you liked my twist on loves a coming:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Ali wrote:
    chu guys are too sweet!:)
    So sweet...youre a lollipop!!!!!!!!!!!
    Glad you liked my twist on loves a coming:)

    :D A wah-wee-pop, huh?? Wan-a-lick?........psyche!!! :D:D

    Glad you shared it! :) *woo-woo, chuga-chuga, chuga-chuga* THE LOVE TRAIN'S COMING! THE LOVE TRAIN'S COMING! :D ALL ABOARD! :D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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