My Wings Will Remain Clean

AliAli Posts: 2,621
The wind is lost
Carefree waters
have swept their way up
Into the sky and stolen it
Putting it in a little box marked
TO HELL.
I can see through you
Realizing your words are lost
And placed in that box,
Waiting for me to open it
soon after I find my shovel
and dirty my wings.

adv 11:15pm
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005

"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"

PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Ali wrote:
    The wind is lost
    Carefree waters
    have swept their way up
    Into the sky and stolen it
    Putting it in a little box marked
    TO HELL.
    I can see through you
    Realizing your words are lost
    And placed in that box,
    Waiting for me to open it
    soon after I find my shovel
    and dirty my wings.

    adv 11:15pm

    This is complicated yet vague, in a very pleasing way.

    I'll read it a few more times.

    Lovin' your stuff lately A. Top notch.
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Thanks Groove.Youre stuff has been pretty on the edge lately too.I wish you would post more.

    This one's about friendship and the power of words.
    People,I think ,can relate to that"GO TO HELL" sort of attitude.
    Just a thought....:)
    Thanks Groove:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Ali wrote:
    Thanks Groove.Youre stuff has been pretty on the edge lately too.I wish you would post more.

    Wish I could, A.

    Material has been slowly leaking out of me lately. It seems to be pretty good when it does, but I'm going through a slow period right now....

    I'll just keep reading your stuff and hope for inspiration....
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Oh stop...dont give me a big head....I want to do this professionally,
    so I hac=ve to do what ever it takes to get my muses flowing......

    Dont worry...itll come.JUst dont force it or itll come out all vacocked.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    I'm not worried...I go through slow periods alot, and make sure to not force it...it always comes back when it's ready and better than before.

    How's the job going?
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    What job?!!!!!!!!!!!!
    This is it...writing.
    I sit home and write and wait for auditions to come along.
    I came up with a great idea for a movie groove.
    Now I just have to write it.
    I have the whole outline.
    Then I'm sending it to Disney.

    Hows your work and your woman?*Sighs with the thought of love*
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    I thought you got a serving job? I know you said you did at some point...

    What's your movie about?

    Work is hectic...lots of hours, lots of stress but I LOVE IT! It's energizing, vitalizing...I have passion for it, which is very cool.

    The woman: over already. Nice while it lasted. Got some experience & poetry out of it. I love love.
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    I thought you got a serving job? I know you said you did at some point...

    What's your movie about?

    Work is hectic...lots of hours, lots of stress but I LOVE IT! It's energizing, vitalizing...I have passion for it, which is very cool.

    The woman: over already. Nice while it lasted. Got some experience & poetry out of it. I love love.
    I tried getting a serving job groove.
    My next step is macy's,,,,I adore fashion.The movie is about a woman and her three kids finding love trying to raise her kids when she saves the day with a song she performs in a talent show.If it goes anywhere I'm summoning pearl Jam to write the first song out of the movie:)Good to hear your work is going well....sorry the passion has already fizzled.:(

    BUT YOU STILL HAVE ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I'm going to bed...catcha later......:)

    love ya....
    ali


    Call me!!!!!!I mean it...we'll yap!!!!!!!
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    I will call ya!!! I really will!!!! Sometime in the next few days....

    Goodnight, dear....
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  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    How late is it OK to call?
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    I can give you a ring right now...I have free long distance...OK?
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    nope, sorry babe...I gotta run....was asking for sometime in the next few days (unless you're gonna be up at like 1 AM tonight...)
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