Sometimes

AliAli Posts: 2,621
Sometimes I don't understand anything....
Politics,religion,life.
I dyed my hair black tonight,
and I'm going to the shore all weekend
to buy a gift for a friendly person to cheer him up on his birthday.

Sometimes you think you have no one.
Mark,Mike, and Mike.
I bought a pair of pants tonight,
and I'm going to wear them this weekend
so they can fall off my hips raggedly while I'm sitting with my friends.

Sometimes I wonder about love.
Dave,Tim, and Kevin.
I talked about hurt tonight,
and I'm going to see an ex boyfriend this weekend
so he can cheer me up and we can talk about the good times.

Sometimes I think about you.
Sex,love, and lust.
I thought about transcendentalism tonight,
and I'm sure I'm going to feel you with me this weekend
as I sit and think about the meaning of life.

Sometimes I wonder about God.
Mary,Jesus,and Joseph.
I talked about the sons of Cain tonight,
and I'm going to read that Bible in case it's all true
so when I die a slow death, my Catholic conscience will be clear.

Maybe.
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005

"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"

PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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  • LeaderOfMenLeaderOfMen Posts: 110
    thats insanely good
    easy to read, and understand so I think
    I will make the world a better place...with my own, two hands.
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    thats insanely good
    easy to read, and understand so I think
    Merci Beaucoup.....je crois que nous voulons une philosophie board sur ce
    service,eh?
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Ali wrote:
    Merci Beaucoup.....je crois que nous voulons une philosophie board sur ce
    service,eh?
    And I liked your poem alot too!:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • excellent..
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    excellent..
    Why thank you so much:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • asphaltasphalt Posts: 113
    good ... good
  • Ali, the title is so Pearly and Jammy! :) Sometimes it's good to just sit on the shore with old pals and comtemplate the meaning of life. Then, to just free your mind of all concious thought and listen to the tide, breathe out and let all the negativity ride out and dissapate, breathe in and fill up with fresh love and smiles. It's easy to remember that there is so much simple beauty in this world to take pleasure in when you're sitting by a large body of water, I find. At any rate, I'm babbling here---I enjoyed your reading your poem, my dear! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Ali, the title is so Pearly and Jammy! :) Sometimes it's good to just sit on the shore with old pals and comtemplate the meaning of life. Then, to just free your mind of all concious thought and listen to the tide, breathe out and let all the negativity ride out and dissapate, breathe in and fill up with fresh love and smiles. It's easy to remember that there is so much simple beauty in this world to take pleasure in when you're sitting by a large body of water, I find. At any rate, I'm babbling here---I enjoyed your reading your poem, my dear! :)
    Thank you B.E.!I expect to go down the shore this weekend and hang with some friends...hopefully sit along the delaware bay where it almost meets the ocean side.We get kinda deep.Talk about things over drinks...have a bonfire...
    thats what I hope to do while going camping this weekend.There seems to be so much conflict in life for me,and drama,no wonder why I studied Theatre!
    Thanks for reading.Cant wait to read more of your posts!:)
    allison!:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    i enjoyed this poem!
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    olderman wrote:
    i enjoyed this poem!
    Thank you Olderman.:)

    How does that song go by that band....
    "Can't find an Olderman?" ;)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    This seems different for you, Ali. It's very cool. I dig it tons.
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  • This poem tells such a great story. Boy I think I must have lived it once or maybe twice. Good one Ali
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • good, actually. i tend to steer clear of poetry thats fluffy, flowery and foo foo. i understood the words and it painted pictures clear in my mind. flow...

    kudos
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Thanks guys...for digging it.....putting it in the chapbook:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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