Lament for my Lover

AliAli Posts: 2,621
Love is not lost
As I dream dreams of you
at night
not knowing your name
and leave no stone unturned
as I search for my lover.
Will he find me before I find Him?
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005

"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"

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  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Fear not, Ali!

    Life is generally good!

    The man will find you if you don't find him!

    (call me!)
    .........................................................................
  • NastNast Posts: 127
    His landscape is dark,
    darker than nightmares,
    and she chose this night to bury him.
    To bury him in a haste.
    To forget him as fast she can.

    Though she told him to steal her grace.

    Her landscape is rouge,
    bleeding in vain,
    and she chose this night bury herself.
    To bury herself in him.
    To forget her temporal pain.

    So she told him to steal her grace.

    But he went deeper.
    So much more.
    Further,
    Than she told him to.
    She lost control,
    Only to dip,
    And slip,
    Into his dark arms.
    An exhaled lulaby,
    A taste,
    He knew her lament,
    She knew his intent.

    The landscape lit,
    Like a foxfire.
    And they chose this fight to bury each other,
    To bury the lust,
    But the consequence,
    Was greater.

    Love was the lament of this tyrant,
    And no matter how much dirt they throw back and forth at each other it will never bury.
    The king of run on sentences...
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Fear not, Ali!

    Life is generally good!

    The man will find you if you don't find him!

    (call me!)
    I'm TOTALLY leaving it up to him to put the moves on me-AND TO FIND ME!
    I actually leave it to God or the upper/higher powers.That way,I know he'll find me.

    And as for you,grooveamatic, my number is (609)555-5555!!!!!!!
    you call me!!!!!!!!!:):):):):):):);)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Nast wrote:
    His landscape is dark,
    darker than nightmares,
    and she chose this night to bury him.
    To bury him in a haste.
    To forget him as fast she can.

    Though she told him to steal her grace.

    Her landscape is rouge,
    bleeding in vain,
    and she chose this night bury herself.
    To bury herself in him.
    To forget her temporal pain.

    So she told him to steal her grace.

    But he went deeper.
    So much more.
    Further,
    Than she told him to.
    She lost control,
    Only to dip,
    And slip,
    Into his dark arms.
    An exhaled lulaby,
    A taste,
    He knew her lament,
    She knew his intent.

    The landscape lit,
    Like a foxfire.
    And they chose this fight to bury each other,
    To bury the lust,
    But the consequence,
    Was greater.

    Love was the lament of this tyrant,
    And no matter how much dirt they throw back and forth at each other it will never bury.
    iT'S GOOD...BUT YOU STILL HAVEN'T MADE ME BLUSH YET.
    MAYBE KAT AND SEA CAN INVENT A "CENSOR" EDIT:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    i'LL WRITE YOU A NASTY ONE TOMORROW nAST...JUST TUNE IN;)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • NastNast Posts: 127
    here's an old one:

    Every friend of mine you kiss,
    Only makes me happier.
    To watch it right before me,
    Only makes me know how much you still care.
    You asked what happened to the man you fell in love with,
    Well maybe the love was never there.

    Why can't you see,
    It was never meant to be.
    Fly Girl
    Fly Girl
    Having sex with Fly Girl
    Fly Girl

    Every friend of mine you fuck,
    Only makes me happier.
    To know you hate me so much,
    Only makes me feel so much more loved before.
    You asked why I act like I'm better than everyone else,
    Well maybe it's 'cause I'm not a whore.

    Why can't you see,
    It was never meant to be.
    Fly Girl
    Fly Girl
    Having sex with Fly Girl
    Fly Girl

    Every friend of mine you kill,
    Only makes me happier.
    To see the impact I made on you,
    Only makes me see why you can't get over with.
    You asked why God was good and why he gave you me.
    Well maybe, just maybe, I never was God's gift.
    The king of run on sentences...
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    tHATS THE SECOND TRAGIC POEM i READ TODAY.tHIS POST WAS A LITTLE MORE HUMOROUS.KIND OF REMINDS ME OF EVERYMAN I"VE COME INTO CONTACT WITH IN THE PAST 32 YEARS OF MY LIFE except FOR THE PAST
    NINE MONTHS.THINGS ARE LOOKINING UP. I HAVENT RECEIVED A DEATH THREAT YET.SERIOUSLY.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    i LIKED THE POEM BEFORE BETTER.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • NastNast Posts: 127
    Now to make you blush...
    The king of run on sentences...
  • NastNast Posts: 127
    She's got a pretty tasty,
    She's got my favorite flower,
    She takes her panties off at night
    To let herself air out.
    Animistically complicated,
    Eccentrically innocent,
    Her slinky sexy short shorts
    Are the reason I gave in.
    She's got a cute brown fluffy,
    She's got my favorite pet,
    She brought bunny to my waterpark
    And got really really wet.
    Silly willy wet.
    She's got a smiley happy,
    She's got my favorite fun,
    She gives good Suki Suki
    Fuck it
    She's my favorite fuck and suck
    She's my favorite fucking twat.
    The king of run on sentences...
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    i BLUSHED A little;)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    well nast...i was going to write you a tricky nasty poem...but youre out.UNTIL NEXT TIME.......



    ALLISON
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • NastNast Posts: 127
    I'm not out...
    The king of run on sentences...
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Cocks and cunts
    No matter which way you rub them
    Will always be hard and difficult to master.
    Girls with sore jaws,
    borne in backseats
    and boys
    with semen flowing from celestial bodies....
    have nothing to do but fuck on a Saturday night.
    Oh the pussy, willows moan and
    A woman bends and kneels
    awaitning her kings final blow job.
    "YOU CAN'T DO THIS TO ME...I'M DRUNK" She teases.
    "Shut up and lay down" he screams.
    BODies naked,
    eyes transfixed on raw skin.
    They were born to copulate.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    This is more art.....
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • NastNast Posts: 127
    I remember the first time,
    spent a good 3 hours down town.
    I do believe thats the best cheek exercise you will ever get...
    if you want dimples... try this... for hours on end.

    Hurts so bad the next day
    The king of run on sentences...
  • NastNast Posts: 127
    Lol I wasn't going to just post that but I accidently hit some buttons and it was done...
    The king of run on sentences...
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Its been so long...I forget what it feels like!:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    She has fantasies...
    Of summer heat and summer lust
    Naked bodies sweating underneath the covers.
    Sometimes she knows their faces,
    sometimes she doesn't.
    Once she met a fantasy man.
    Had a one night stand with him,
    on all fours and a belt in his hand.
    Couldnt tell if it was a rape-wish.
    He followed her to the bank.
    She still has fantasies,
    not knowing whose face will pop up
    in the middle of the night to join her.
    Be careful though,
    someone could be reading her mind.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • NastNast Posts: 127
    I like this one better of the last two, seems a little more straight forward, and honest.
    The king of run on sentences...
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    My next poetry book after 2005's is going to be all about sex.c2005adev
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • NastNast Posts: 127
    Awesome, I believe thats what all poetry should be about... even if its written metaphorically.

    Poems, like sex, are better when they reach a climax... ;)
    The king of run on sentences...
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Yep....I agree.I'm out.Back to work at 923pm!Later;)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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