Worldwide Suicide

Ali

In a bedside-blue,
dying,
with no relation to the word,
but a white dog and a family
so wide,it stretches the Earth.
"I'm not ready to go yet,God..."
And so he plants my body back into bed.
For love is strong,
Only He is wise,
an an accidental dismissal
would've meant death.
Alive in the light,
only asking for a breath,
the love of one,
the love of many.

c2006adev
Thanks PJ and klan and BE....

Ms. Haiku

Are these the lyrics? It sounded a lot like lukin, as in I couldn't understand what was being said.

Actually, they aren't the lyrics, right? OK, so we have to figure out lyrics to the words "Worldwide Suicide" hmmmm

look on the desert floor
breasts of women strong
once
until cut off from their families
by a nuclear test
they have started
a worldwide suicide
just to put the pieces back

FinsburyParkCarrots

The one person who heard the whole thing in his car in Indiana yesterday said there's a reference to Monday, and war.

Ali

Ms. Haiku wrote:

Are these the lyrics? It sounded a lot like lukin, as in I couldn't understand what was being said.

Actually, they aren't the lyrics, right? OK, so we have to figure out lyrics to the words "Worldwide Suicide" hmmmm

look on the desert floor
breasts of women strong
once
until cut off from their families
by a nuclear test
they have started
a worldwide suicide
just to put the pieces back

Well,I guess you have to understand poetry.
Put yourself in any free-flowing form.
The title actually,
is a tribute to the new album,
the poem,if youve been reading my stuff or anybody's,
has to do with personal strife....and sickness....


Thanks for the lyrics to WWS.:D

Ms. Haiku

Ali wrote:

Well,I guess you have to understand poetry.

Oops, there must be a misunderstanding between posts. I do understand poetry.

I have no problem with tributes, I was just a little confused at first, and I think my original post shows that confusion. In other threads I have participated in analyzing actual lyrics, and I didn't realize at first these were not actual lyrics. Mine are not lyrics either. I don't think they are even close since I couldn't understand what was being said. I just did what you did. I thought that was what this thread implied - figure out your own idea of a Worldwide Suicide.

Ali

Ms. Haiku wrote:

Oops, there must be a misunderstanding between posts. I do understand poetry.

I have no problem with tributes, I was just a little confused at first, and I think my original post shows that confusion. In other threads I have participated in analyzing actual lyrics, and I didn't realize at first these were not actual lyrics. Mine are not lyrics either. I don't think they are even close since I couldn't understand what was being said. I just did what you did. I thought that was what this thread implied - figure out your own idea of a Worldwide Suicide.

well,its my poetry,with a tributal title to pearl jam.i think the poem makes sense on its own though.thank you.