"Room"

AliAli Posts: 2,621
edited January 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Room

One room
Bare
Slanted walls
Dust filled window sills
Laden with raindrops and
a Bible and a coffeemug
just holding on to the ledge.
A dilapidated roof hangs over my head
With a light fixture 1/2 cocked, with a drawstring
hanging-ready to be pulled,to illuminate the room.
Someone's lived here before me.
Maybe older,wiser,smarter,richer,poorer.
I move to the bed,
in the center of the room, lay
my head on the pillow at the foot of the bed.
Did she do what I did whiile I was here in this room?
Did she live a good life?
I just turn on the radio at the edge of the bed...
and let my mind wander away......
"Room"
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005

"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"

PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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  • MEGANMEGAN Posts: 7
    thought i heard elton john on the radio today
    but it turned out to be genesis
    your pencil's a little dull there
    mike says from the desk
    i know
    i only wanted to match
    my head
    so now that everybody's left me alone in the back seat of the car i do have to laugh at myself
    driver
    she's using my tub
    guess i'll sleep with both shoes on tonight
    in case the ancient mariner happens
    i've rearranged all the players
    for what purpose there was one way back
    i think its name was freedom
    but you know my memory's bad
    ryan do you have the key
    today they turned down my radio with the bedsheets
    i carry my cup around like
    a ghost of ichabod
    don't let me see
    ya know morgan
    that goes for the stuff in my pocket too
    does anybody have any idea what the world trade organization is all about?
    cuz i don't
    yeah i saw your band jumpin around onstage with a soccerball
    but before we worry about taxes and tariffs...
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    and Before Mark called
    And after I thought about calling Neen
    But was disturbed by the thought of mike
    I stood betwixt myself and said
    WHY SHOULD I CALL THAT SNAKE?
    DOES HE EVER CALL ME?
    Seeming a bit irrational in thought...
    I came to...realizing my own imperviousness
    to my inner child
    I gave in....
    Realizing it

    was better to call no one back.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • Ali wrote:
    Room

    One room
    Bare
    Slanted walls
    Dust filled window sills
    Laden with raindrops and
    a Bible and a coffeemug
    just holding on to the ledge.
    A dilapidated roof hangs over my head
    With a light fixture 1/2 cocked, with a drawstring
    hanging-ready to be pulled,to illuminate the room.
    Someone's lived here before me.
    Maybe older,wiser,smarter,richer,poorer.
    I move to the bed,
    in the center of the room, lay
    my head on the pillow at the foot of the bed.
    Did she do what I did whiile I was here in this room?
    Did she live a good life?
    I just turn on the radio at the edge of the bed...
    and let my mind wander away......
    "Room"


    The ghosts haunt all of our hallways.
    I thought I saw one in the doorway,
    I think I smelled his musky cologne,
    The one he wore on those nights,
    When he slipped silently, lovingly,
    Into her bed,
    To hold her,
    In this room.

    A cool breeze encircles me but I feel only warmth.


    I enjoyed this "Room", very much, Ali! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Thanks for the Enlightenment!!!!!:):):):):)
    Peace....;)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • Ali wrote:
    Room

    One room
    Bare
    Slanted walls
    Dust filled window sills
    Laden with raindrops and
    a Bible and a coffeemug
    just holding on to the ledge.
    A dilapidated roof hangs over my head
    With a light fixture 1/2 cocked, with a drawstring
    hanging-ready to be pulled,to illuminate the room.
    Someone's lived here before me.
    Maybe older,wiser,smarter,richer,poorer.
    I move to the bed,
    in the center of the room, lay
    my head on the pillow at the foot of the bed.
    Did she do what I did whiile I was here in this room?
    Did she live a good life?
    I just turn on the radio at the edge of the bed...
    and let my mind wander away......
    "Room"

    That was Beautiful !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    ...It's only after disaster that we can be resurrected...
    it's only after you've lost everything ...that you are free to do anything....(Fight Club)

    ... I'll ride the wave...where it takes me....
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Thank you PearlJam Necklace...so beautiful of yourself to say as well.
    Its so good to hear comments from this website....ya know,
    puts your writings/practice into perspective...
    but once again thank you for the comment..I am so touched.:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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