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I. & II.

AliAli Posts: 2,621
edited May 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I.
Your love is like
a mad,sickening disease
to which there is no cure
but death itself.
And even on
the immortal deathbed
the pain of ecstasy
compares nothing
to the pain of being
with
or
without,
you.

II.
A Saturday night fight,
is what to expect dear Brian.
A glass,
never empty,
filled with
laughs and salutations,
dreams and wishes,
hopes and desires.
A Saturday night episode,
guitars playing,
songs sung,
and
people wishing
for heaven to hit them
like a blackjack card.
Saturday Night,
and it all feels right.




HAPPY MEMORIAL DAY SPAGHETTI-HEAD AND ALL THOSE READING.....
LOVE TO YOU;)
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005

"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"

PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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  • TooMuchBloodTooMuchBlood Posts: 312
    Like 'em a lot, Ali! The "blackjack card" part is great!
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    One of your absolute best, A.

    Congrats on the 1000th post!
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Well its Saturday night,
    and the drinks are at end.
    The clock hit 10:30,
    no more money to spend.
    I'll rely on my wit,
    I'll rely on this wisdom,
    words weave a web,
    in this glorious kingdom.
    I'll probably relax,
    just sit and fizzle,
    while my body lays dormant,
    I'm cold-whack fischizzle.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    my body lays limp
    and i feel no sufferring.
    your soft caress used to hold such warmth.
    your kisses were so tender.
    but you turned into a cocained freak violent weak excuse for a man.
    and thats the way you stayed.
    my body lays limp
    and i feel no sufferring.
    I can only dream of the way things used to be,
    but I know now its over.
    It was never meant to be.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Ali wrote:
    my body lays limp
    and i feel no sufferring.
    your soft caress used to hold such warmth.
    your kisses were so tender.
    but you turned into a cocained freak violent weak excuse for a man.
    and thats the way you stayed.
    my body lays limp
    and i feel no sufferring.
    I can only dream of the way things used to be,
    but I know now its over.
    It was never meant to be.

    so terribly sad... :(
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  • IfGoingRightIsWrongIfGoingRightIsWrong Posts: 18
    These are all great poems, Ali. I enjoy your stuff very much.
    If going right is wrong, I don't wanna go right!
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    grooveamatic wrote:
    so terribly sad... :(
    I'm much better now,groove,being able to talk about it...he's better too.He found his higher power,yet the relationship is still at its end.:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    IfGoingRightIsWrong wrote:
    These are all great poems, Ali. I enjoy your stuff very much.

    Thank you very much!!!!!!!The new chapbook will be out before September!!!!
    Now if I can just work on a publisher....hmmmmm...I mean,international distribution.Make poetry a household name.Thats my goal.(C2005adev):)

    allison:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Ali wrote:
    I'm much better now,groove,being able to talk about it...he's better too.He found his higher power,yet the relationship is still at its end.:)

    Glad to hear it.

    Call me. :)
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Oh Groove...I told you...my # is 555-5555.Pick up the phone and dial....;)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Ali wrote:
    Oh Groove...I told you...my # is 555-5555.Pick up the phone and dial....;)

    You are too adorable....

    I must receive a copy of this chapbook you speak of....
    .........................................................................
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    When I get it printed...I'll post it on the board and you can leave a mailing address,buisiness address...and I'll send one out.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Ali wrote:
    When I get it printed...I'll post it on the board and you can leave a mailing address,buisiness address...and I'll send one out.

    paying for the printing out-of-pocket?
    .........................................................................
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Yea...I dont know how much yet.If I want it catalogue,newspaper, or standard.c2005 adev
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Ali wrote:
    Yea...I dont know how much yet.If I want it catalogue,newspaper, or standard.c2005 adev

    that stuff can get pretty expensive...i've looked into it before....i had Staples print me up a little book before and it was pretty cheap, but of course nothing like an actual book....it'd be awesome if you could get something professional looking....
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    i KNOW MY FIRST BOOK COST ME A PRETTY PENNY.tHE SECOND WAS FREE.
    tHE THIRD...i'M PAYING FOR LIKE 500 COPIES.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Ali wrote:
    i KNOW MY FIRST BOOK COST ME A PRETTY PENNY.tHE SECOND WAS FREE.
    tHE THIRD...i'M PAYING FOR LIKE 500 COPIES.

    well...make sure to save one for me!
    .........................................................................
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Iwill!!!!!!
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    I must be going soon dear.
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