i and ii.

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i.


"Dark"

Have you ever slept in the dark?
Yes.
Have you ever made love in the dark?
Yes.
Have you ever killed anyone in the dark?
No.
Have you felt the prescence of someone in the dark?
Yes.
Have you ever thought you were going to die in the dark?
Yes.


ii.

"Rollercoaster"

I saw one white,
rolling along the tracks,
people yelling.
What were they yelling for?
The inside movements on the track
seemed formidable
and damned enthralling...
The amusement ride of the century...
and you can even bring your Coke onboard.
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005

"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"

PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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  • Random thoughts by Ali :) This is different than your other work...good to see you expanding.
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Random thoughts by Ali :) This is different than your other work...good to see you expanding.
    Thank you!!!!
    This is going in the poetry chapbook!:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • Very nice Ali......
    Hope all is well
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Thanks poet...just can't wait to find some cash and a "REAL" job for a while...(since my town is non-existant for local artists paying jobs).....and save up money and move to Cali-fucking -fornia.San Diego.:)
    Say a prayer for me...I need one/many.;)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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