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AliAli Posts: 2,621
edited February 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Everyone of us is a snowflake,
and your chasing me with a blowtorch.
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005

"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"

PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Just theeeeeeenkin'!

    If every one of us is a snowflake, then the dude with the blowtorch is a snowflake too, and surely he'll melt as soon as he gets that blowtorch hot enough to chase people with it. So you should be okay. :)
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Beach.
    Orange sky.
    Mayan drumbeats
    echoing remnants
    from the desert.
    Sleeping.
    Silver suits with
    cameras and
    orange flashes.
    Mental contact.
    The picture was taken,
    and,
    being,
    gave me,
    a scary thought,a scary look.
    I awoke refreshed.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    FinsburyParkCarrots wrote:
    Just theeeeeeenkin'!

    If every one of us is a snowflake, then the dude with the blowtorch is a snowflake too, and surely he'll melt as soon as he gets that blowtorch hot enough to chase people with it. So you should be okay. :)

    :D:D

    And you're being clever!
    &&&&&&&&&&&&&&
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    FinsburyParkCarrots wrote:
    Just theeeeeeenkin'!

    If every one of us is a snowflake, then the dude with the blowtorch is a snowflake too, and surely he'll melt as soon as he gets that blowtorch hot enough to chase people with it. So you should be okay. :)
    Youre the best finns:D
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    Ali wrote:
    Everyone of us is a snowflake,
    and your chasing me with a blowtorch.

    I have a vision of a person running around in the blowing snow with a blow torch..

    nice couplet, just need to fix the your to you're :)

    actually, 'you are' would be ok, as well.
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    olderman wrote:
    I have a vision of a person running around in the blowing snow with a blow torch..

    nice couplet, just need to fix the your to you're :)

    actually, 'you are' would be ok, as well.
    Sorry,....:D

    Evryone of us is a snowflake,
    and YOU ARE chasing me with a blowtorch.

    rather comical I thought.....:D


    "YOU ARE....a tower of strength to me...."
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    Ali wrote:
    Sorry,....:D

    Evryone of us is a snowflake,
    and YOU ARE chasing me with a blowtorch.

    rather comical I thought.....:D


    "YOU ARE....a tower of strength to me...."

    You Are Rocks!

    i was just in a mood ali..

    we need the edit button back, eh?
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
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