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AliAli Posts: 2,621
edited May 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Silent screams
and
psychic dreams
heed me not
late at night in bed
with a case of the frights-
nightmares creeping in from
ghosts hiding underneath the bed.
I call your name at night-
(you're the only one who understands)
and you answer back,
I LOVE YOU-JUST HANG IN THERE....
Dancing angels singing songs on destiny's wingtips,
you are.
An angel blanketed in the friendship on a spring night-
rescuing me from insanity's darkened dream of nightmare come-by.
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005

"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"

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  • even flow?even flow? Posts: 8,066
    Very nice Ali!!!!!
    You've changed your place in this world!
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    even flow? wrote:
    Very nice Ali!!!!!
    Why thank you evenflow...nice of you to say....:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • jamjamjamjam Posts: 491
    You scare me, j/k Ali:):):)Hi! I love the line "I LOVE YOU- JUST HANG IN THERE"
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    i agree with evenflow

    a good expression of your nightmares..

    thanks for the poem :)
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    olderman wrote:
    i agree with evenflow

    a good expression of your nightmares..

    thanks for the poem :)

    Thank you for listening.
    I started to have a nightmare and I kept calling out one name,
    to kind of wake myself up,
    and I heard this voice,
    in tongues,
    say
    I LOVE YOU-HANG IN THERE.
    The funny thing was
    that I was listening to Pearl Jam
    right before I fell asleep
    and I was calling to Eddie Vedder as I was put under!!!!!
    I just dont know who responded
    To my cries because the voices were in tongues.
    Bizarre,yet true story.
    adv
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Ali wrote:
    Thank you for listening.
    I started to have a nightmare and I kept calling out one name,
    to kind of wake myself up,
    and I heard this voice,
    in tongues,
    say
    I LOVE YOU-HANG IN THERE.
    The funny thing was
    that I was listening to Pearl Jam
    right before I fell asleep
    and I was calling to Eddie Vedder as I was put under!!!!!
    I just dont know who responded
    To my cries because the voices were in tongues.
    Bizarre,yet true story.
    adv
    So...I did a little nip and tuck
    and ....
    made a poem!
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • NastNast Posts: 127
    "ghosts hiding underneath the bed"

    Do you have any skeletons in your closet as well?

    "An angel blanketed in the friendship on a spring night"

    I liked.

    -D
    The king of run on sentences...
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Dont we all have skeletons in our closets?
    I have a few sins I'd rather not reminisce about.
    The punishment and karma of it afterward was just as doubly horrific
    when you get a taste of the afterlife and what could lie beyond if youre a bad girl;)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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