Drug Fascination

AliAli Posts: 2,621
I wanna line up properly....
I wanna hit of that.
I wanna die in an asphalt wonder
full of metal surprise.
I want the party to last all night
and day
God- make it never go away.
I want to stay lit and drown
in the big,blue ocean of sand
with the sharks playing
with the insides
of my soul,
stay intoxicated in you,
stay intoxicated in the rhythm of my celebration,
with only the sound
of angels dancing on my grave.


WRITERS NOTE:
(Some call this suicidal or the retreatment
into a non-political state,
so be it.)
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005

"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"

PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Well, it does what poetry can do best: be incredibly affecting. It elicits a strong reaction, which means it is written well.

    Your streak continues!
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Well, it does what poetry can do best: be incredibly affecting. It elicits a strong reaction, which means it is written well.

    Your streak continues!
    Thanks groove....
    Mind you also...it is a fictional piece.
    I feel no one should subject themselves to drug use....
    it is only with mere imagination and the freedom of the mind for altering oneself that one chooses to do so.
    "Drinks" on the other hand......;)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Ali wrote:
    Thanks groove....
    Mind you also...it is a fictional piece.
    I feel no one should subject themselves to drug use....
    it is only with mere imagination and the freedom of the mind for altering oneself that one chooses to do so.
    "Drinks" on the other hand......;)

    Well, you know, alcohol is a drug... :)

    I figured the piece was fictional. Didn't sound like your thoughts. But I still found it difficult to read, being so opposite of my own beliefs and lifestyle. Still quite well-written, though.
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Well, you know, alcohol is a drug... :)

    I figured the piece was fictional. Didn't sound like your thoughts. But I still found it difficult to read, being so opposite of my own beliefs and lifestyle. Still quite well-written, though.
    Thanks groove....
    ya know....sex is a drug...infatuation...love;)
    Could be what my muses were trying to portray......:0

    Heart cha...
    ali
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Ali wrote:
    ya know....sex is a drug...infatuation...love;)

    Ahhh..and the most powerful, addictive one at that.

    Is poetry a fix for the love addicted?
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    I'm sure it is....:)

    Gotta go...going to an agency tomorrow.
    I NEED R E P R E S E N T A T I O N!!!!!!!
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Ali wrote:
    I'm sure it is....:)

    Gotta go...going to an agency tomorrow.
    I NEED R E P R E S E N T A T I O N!!!!!!!

    Good luck. Let me know how it goes.

    (call if you want...I have off tomorrow.)
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  • Sex is my drug
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Oh my dear ,sweet poet!
    Such honesty.

    I wish I could get some from someone who really wanted it...
    OR....
    I wish I could get some at all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:):):):):):):)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Ali wrote:
    Oh my dear ,sweet poet!
    Such honesty.

    I wish I could get some from someone who really wanted it...
    OR....
    I wish I could get some at all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:):):):):):):)



    ....ahem....
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    ....ahem....
    Sorry...didnt mean to get so personal......
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Ali wrote:
    Sorry...didnt mean to get so personal......

    I think you misread that. Perhaps I was being too subtle.

    I meant:

    Over here! I'll do it!

    ;)
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    OH!!!!!
    PICK ME PICK ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Thats what you were trying to say!!!!!!

    Now read my seduction poem groove....
    oh...I think you already have.oh well....

    Call me!!!!!!!!WE'll do lunch!Gotta tell you how things went with the agent.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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