Seduction

AliAli Posts: 2,621
Do you feel the moonlight on your back?
Playing sweet passions of conception unto the eyes of the world...
Do you feel the water brush against your feet?
Signifying the politeness of your body...
Do you feel the sand against your breast?
Showing your sucception to love in the Summer heat...
I once knew a man,
but his visions withered with the actions
of a celebration slept upon on a nightfall.
We felt the sun,
yet briefly,
and it came and went.
What we felt was much too scarce
for Aphrodite's dream,
And
She decided,
There's more of a seduction in the days ahead.
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005

"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"

PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    "signifying the politeness of your body"

    love that line
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Thank you daaaaarrrrrling!!!!!!!!!:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • Very nice, Ali! :) I love how it ends with a promise of more seduction in the days ahead. ;) Oooo! :D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    some very nice moments in this poem, ali


    :)
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Danka shane to you both:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    feeling it's humidity, beautiful!
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