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AliAli Posts: 2,621
edited January 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Wise men walk.
Talk.
Read newspapers.
Study things.
Teach.
In the abscence of suffering,
there is poverty.In its' being,
there is ignorance of God,Law,
and Man.
For the laws of nature are strong,
and a cloud holds water which
we need to survive.
Women mourn as well.
Ruth just sits and cries.
Sadness is mistaken as illness,
and illness for disease, and
disease as righteousness.
For the sad weep and wail,
for a true leader will bring a smile to your face.

adv 1/23/06@approx.10:48p.m.
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005

"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"

PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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  • EvilToasterElfEvilToasterElf Posts: 1,119
    This seems more "slammish" than your usual.

    Some nice abstract imagery that completely avoids being lofty, I like it

    Sadness is mistaken as illness,
    and illness for disease, and
    disease as righteousness.
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    EvilToasterElf wrote:
    This seems more "slammish" than your usual.

    Some nice abstract imagery that completely avoids being lofty, I like it

    Sadness is mistaken as illness,
    and illness for disease, and
    disease as righteousness.
    Thanks eat.

    Let me tell you,the idolization on the porch is overwhelming.
    They seem to think poeple in this band are gods or something...
    unlike real people.

    What ever happened to cool people EAT?
    It makes me want to suffer more....
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • EvilToasterElfEvilToasterElf Posts: 1,119
    Ali wrote:
    Thanks eat.

    Let me tell you,the idolization on the porch is overwhelming.
    They seem to think poeple in this band are gods or something...
    unlike real people.

    What ever happened to cool people EAT?
    It makes me want to suffer more....

    You know what they say about absence and the heart, they come closer to gods every day that they aren't on tour, when they settle back down to earth people can focus a little better on the village drunkard and his posse slamming down some tunes to the unforgiving masses. Not that they don't rock...HARD.

    Cool people in general are few and far between on the internet or otherwise.
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    EvilToasterElf wrote:
    You know what they say about absence and the heart, they come closer to gods every day that they aren't on tour, when they settle back down to earth people can focus a little better on the village drunkard and his posse slamming down some tunes to the unforgiving masses. Not that they don't rock...HARD.

    Cool people in general are few and far between on the internet or otherwise.
    Yea,well thats wrong too.And nobody in PJ is a vIllage idiot or drunk to me...i sincerely love them to death.I think theyre completely innocent...and i'd do anything to protect them and my friends.
    Its just..I cry solmetimes..ya know.sorry I didnt "respond"last night to your message......I couldnt.Too much on my mind....apologies.
    I'll getcha 2nite around 11.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • velvet I sitevelvet I site Posts: 192
    this poem is wonderful A-- unique, intelligent, and hopefully inspiring... thanks for creating and sharing so much... always a pleasure to read :)
    change begins with discontent.
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    velvet I site wrote:
    this poem is wonderful A-- unique, intelligent, and hopefully inspiring... thanks for creating and sharing so much... always a pleasure to read :)
    You are so sweet site one.
    I'll try to wear my velvet for you today.:)



    IN MEMORY:My LOve....JOey Ramone.....:(:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • velvet I sitevelvet I site Posts: 192
    Ali wrote:
    You are so sweet site one.
    I'll try to wear my velvet for you today.:)




    i know.

    haha, j/k...:D

    just a quick heads-up, i put a lengthy briefing to U in bossman3188's poem "So You Can Sleep At Night"... so maybe check that out when/if you get a chance... thanks for being so wonderful! :)
    change begins with discontent.
  • EvilToasterElfEvilToasterElf Posts: 1,119
    Ali wrote:
    Yea,well thats wrong too.And nobody in PJ is a vIllage idiot or drunk to me...i sincerely love them to death.I think theyre completely innocent...and i'd do anything to protect them and my friends.
    Its just..I cry solmetimes..ya know.sorry I didnt "respond"last night to your message......I couldnt.Too much on my mind....apologies.
    I'll getcha 2nite around 11.

    Put it out of your mind. I'm sure you have entirely more important things going on up there anyway. No hurry, no worry, just feel better.
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    EvilToasterElf wrote:
    Put it out of your mind. I'm sure you have entirely more important things going on up there anyway. No hurry, no worry, just feel better.
    i FEEL fine,THANK YOU.

    JUST alot to think abnnd talk about.
    Sometimes I wonder if I'm even talking out loud.

    OH...play date changed.Its final.FEB 6th....7pm.
    Its on all encompassing trip.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • EvilToasterElfEvilToasterElf Posts: 1,119
    Ali wrote:
    i FEEL fine,THANK YOU.

    JUST alot to think abnnd talk about.
    Sometimes I wonder if I'm even talking out loud.

    OH...play date changed.Its final.FEB 6th....7pm.
    Its on all encompassing trip.


    I'm there, should I get myself dolled up?
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    I really like this one alot Ali! Good read! :):)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    EvilToasterElf wrote:
    I'm there, should I get myself dolled up?
    Yea.
    And put some make up on.;)

    I'll let you cry on my shoulder and let you see who I really am.

    I must admit...I have no idea if anyone is going to show up.
    Gotta check now and see if flyers can be posted for it,
    or if its a private reading for friends only.
    I think its private,
    so I'm only inviting thoses from the board here and family
    and others....
    posting private invites to critics, I think.
    Talk to ya over the weekend...

    allison
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    great as ussual ali
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
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