What I wish the future would hold,will hold.

AliAli Posts: 2,621
edited August 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
On this side of life,
I can see the trees.
I can smell the flowers,
and play with the bees.

On this side of life,
I can touch the sun.
It is never lost in time,
Time has just begun.

On this side of life,
I can play all day and night.
We are all like children,
For there is no fight.

On this side of life,
I can think all day.
Bringing to light new ideas,
forcing the blue away.

On this side of life,
I can kiss your cheek,
spurt poetic words,
and never be meek.

On this side of life,
I simply must say,
Let us all be kind,
for in our hearts- you shall stay.
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005

"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"

PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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Comments

  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Very nice Ali. :)
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  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Effective repetition. Quite nice.
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Yeah well...i'm going to have another crack at it if I can!!!!!!

    Thank you both!!!!!
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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