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Yea...and?

AliAli Posts: 2,621
edited August 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Wishing for nothing
wishing for hate
I wish the night would come
and devour you like space eternal
I wish an alligator would stop on your bones
And a shark would eat you up.
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005

"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"

PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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  • LeaderOfMenLeaderOfMen Posts: 110
    the aligator likes to eat too
    I will make the world a better place...with my own, two hands.
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    At first I didn't think I liked this.

    Then it hit me, in it's childlike simplicity.

    It is very cool.
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  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    LeaderOfMen wrote:
    the aligator likes to eat too

    ps....I love this response LOM. :)
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  • NothingbetterNothingbetter Posts: 570
    I quick rant of rage. Interesting.
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Nothingbetter wrote:
    I quick rant of rage. Interesting.
    Just a quick little fictional piece:)


    P e a c e a n d L o v e ........


    allison


    ps or maybe I just got pissed for a second......
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
    short and down to the point! Like it Ali!
    Peace to you
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    a poet wrote:
    short and down to the point! Like it Ali!
    Peace to you
    Poet...u gotta write somethin!I'll be drinkin a drink 4 u!



    allsion:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • Mr PyjamaMr Pyjama Posts: 253
    Nothingbetter wrote:
    I quick rant of rage. Interesting.

    indeedy :) not pretentious at all, which is nice.
    Situations get fucked up and turned around sooner or later...
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Mr Pyjama wrote:
    indeedy :) not pretentious at all, which is nice.
    Yea...welll....I guess I got it in me!!!!!!
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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