Palm Tree Ring
Ali
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I wear a palm tree
On my left hand,
ring finger.
As though someone
has slipped it on,
secreetly,
a
mind-connection game
with
my chain smoking
and
gurgling banana pancakes
as I catch them on fire
as
the smoke alarm waits
to be rung.
To
You
I
Give
A
Kiss,
My husband.
On my left hand,
ring finger.
As though someone
has slipped it on,
secreetly,
a
mind-connection game
with
my chain smoking
and
gurgling banana pancakes
as I catch them on fire
as
the smoke alarm waits
to be rung.
To
You
I
Give
A
Kiss,
My husband.
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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my mind swirls after reading this...especially because I am familiar with a lot of your past writings.
And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key
and it reflects in my writing sometimes...ie trying to create,trying to put a
spirit into what I write...but...
Thanks...been busy fighting off the pagans lately.:D
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
damned pegans!
btw, I was not saying it was not good. I rather liked it. It just doesn't seem in-line (content) with your normal stuff.
I was thrown of fby the ending
And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key
Oh, is 'the husband' one that you were tring to entise buy trickery of wearing a ring or is there a special man we don't know about?
And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key
see Ed's church?--he's breathing fire.....
Your writings are always spirited, Ali!
I totally agree. Hope you didn't take my first post the wrong way.
And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key
The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
Well..its just in the esscence of realing finding yourself when youre sitting alone in a room,wondering.Like when you think someone's about to call you,
and they do.Like someone is smiling at you the whole time.Like,///why did
I put this ring on my left ring finger...I'm NOT engaged....yet....still waiting,
:(:)
Groovey...ps...where ya been?!!!
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
but memories...they eat me
I've seen it all before,...
bring it on cause I'm no victim.
-Ghost
Time, time everywhere but not a moment to think....i browse the pit almost every day but rarely have time to be involved in the goings-on....been posting occasionally....rest assured, I'm always watching....;)