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Slam me one more time asshole

AliAli Posts: 2,621
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Don't feed me no line...
A circus within my mind.
Infiltrate,
Subjugate,
Penetrate,
Dissintigrate your tiny ass
with a flamethrower two feet long.
You tear apart my dreams
with your silent screams
and sexual teams
of filled latrines
with these bubble headed girls
that you think
look like me
and I'm suppossed to act for you?
To act as though
I've lost my love for my beliefs?
For the complete?
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005

"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"

PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    This ones for all the men whove ever wronged me.;)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • pearlmuttpearlmutt Posts: 392
    you tell em girl!

    float like a butterfly
    sting like a bee
    I may be little
    but i'm muhamed
    ALI
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    I had to do it pearlmutt.
    Somepeople just never give you any slack or can see your pain.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    Hey Ali. I do like that.

    That reminded me a little of one I wrote a while ago.

    The Stud

    Don't call me "babe"
    I've got a name
    I don't want to play your silly games
    You've had far too many partners in your bed
    Spent too much time living with your head
    Don't look so surprised at what I just said
    The truth hurts sometimes
    Especially if you've been living in denial for such a long time
    I'm not impressed by your arrogance
    I'm not amazed by your lack of common sense
    I don't want to be a number in your little black book
    I won't be the fish that swallowed the hook
    Using people the way that you do shouldn't leave you feeling so proud
    You lie to them, use them, and then are nowhere to be found
    And you brag to your buddies the very next day
    About how you got laid
    And another girl sits home by the phone feeling lonely and betrayed
    Give me one good reason why I should stay
    I don't think you'd be very good anyway
    Not worth the price I'd have to pay
  • SPEEDY MCCREADYSPEEDY MCCREADY Posts: 25,620
    Ali wrote:
    This ones for all the men whove ever wronged me.;)
    hi Ali.......
    Take me piece by piece.....
    Till there aint nothing left worth taking away from me.....
  • brain of cbrain of c Posts: 5,213
    were you tied up taken away and held for ransom?


    or did you go willingly with this prince?

    grow up and live with your choices.
    d'oh!!!!!!

    http://www.myspace.com/brain_of_c
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    leave her alone little guy......don't be such an arse......
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    Ali wrote:
    I had to do it pearlmutt.
    Somepeople just never give you any slack or can see your pain.

    so true...
    you expressed it perfectly.
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    YEAH ALI!!! That was a great! I loved your rhymes and this part: "Dissintigrate your tiny ass with a flamethrower two feet long.", oh girl, I was laughing hard at that one!!!! Really great read. :)

    "The Stud" was a great compliment to this thread as well. :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
    you tell em, Ali!!!!
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,265
    It sounds like it should be spoken word.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • my2handsmy2hands Posts: 17,117
    Ali wrote:
    This ones for all the men whove ever wronged me.;)


    you've been with the wrong men :)
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    my2hands wrote:
    you've been with the wrong men :)

    back off man.


    ;)
    .........................................................................
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