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i and ii

AliAli Posts: 2,621
edited September 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i.

The Tv hides your eyes
from the controversies
less suited for the human mind.
I'm guilty for being the hand
who holds the blindfold
as I distort your soul
from the inevitable truth
that someday
we will blow up from
The a-bomb.

ii.

Beauteous day,
Beauteous way.
He walks without a shadow
And moves in sound.
Eyes blue as crystallized ice,
melting with tongues,
pink and foreboden....
i have refused my
part in this world
and will lay my wishes
and thoughts
upon the path
of righteousness
without haste,
for mistakes leave memories
in others hearts,
I feel faultless.
My soul beckons
someday
to be released
from this Septembered World.
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005

"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"

PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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Comments

  • Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
    What An Ending Ali... Loved It!!
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    a poet wrote:
    What An Ending Ali... Loved It!!
    Thanks poet.




    Money and manipulation do not a woman need,
    But sex and passion must be used with heed.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Sea-bird sea-moon
    Earthquake murmuring
    Fast- burning incense
    Clamoring surging
    Serpentine road
    To the chinses caves
    Home of the winds
    The gods of mourning
    ___________________James Morrison_______________________

    If there's another thing that I'm obsessed with...its the chinese culture represented in art and poetry and spirituality.Theres just something I can relate to with those monks sitting around drinking wine all day,
    writing such great poetry.....
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • NothingbetterNothingbetter Wichita, KS Posts: 570
    I like the creativity. Neat way to set it up and move it, Ali :)
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  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    I really liked the second verse Ali, I think that's where you came into your own and realised your vision.....and I found it powerful - your vision, and sad too
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Thanks ISN...summer just seems so sad at the end of September,
    arriving is the new season.....with newer colors and hues and emotions.....
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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