Relentless

Ali

Rain falls
Summer ends
The coming is over
The new life just begun.
A hero's life,
The will is won.

SPEEDY MCCREADY

showoff......


i liked that....

now not only am i a poet.......but im a critic too...........

Ali

Thanks Speedy!!!!:):):)
Are you from the west coast,east coast or central-nth or sth?

THIS CAN BE A CHAT ROOM YA KNOW!!!!
(Youre not at the aet anymore toto!!!)

twin2

Ali wrote:

Rain falls
Summer ends
The coming is over
The new life just begun.
A hero's life,
The will is won.

That was short and sweet. I like it.

lovin kind

mountains
nets and dreams
bouncing all around
never falling down

or at least
not in the way
that makes us sad

Righteous Jammer

death of the leaves
restless air
coolness of my walk
this is how
i feel most alive

Ali

And when the bells ring
They summon sweetness
And an unwillingness that leads me
Into a new bloody Sunday's song.

Righteous Jammer

Tomorrow we enter the town of my birth
I want to be ready- J. Morrison