Write a poem about yourself.Who you really are.....

AliAli Posts: 2,621
edited November 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I'm a voice in the dark
I wear makeup
when I have time to put it on
and try to eat veggies.
I like it hard and punk
and want to say
HAPPY HALLOWEEN!
I love men,
"Oh THAT ED VEDDER!!!"
And like to spank my girl friends asses
just for attention!
Like to drink?
Pick me as your drinking partner-
Southern Comfort with lime chilled
&
Dr. Peppers hitting the shots hard...
I like clothes Victorian thru current,but,
prefer the older stuff.
I'm a poet,
a pauper,
an artist,
a playwright,
an actess,
a singer,
and I struggle with the middle class too...
I enjoy working alongside
of everyday Joes
and terrorizing them with
FORBIDDEN humor,
psychological enzymes,
&
Philosophical wonderments.
my parents?
I want to get to know them
and watch after them for a 1/2 more of a year...
for they need a little excitement
in their rock and roll world...
&
&
&
&
I am morbid in love,
morbid in hate,
morbid in trust,
morbid in fate.

allison vigh
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005

"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"

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  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    I am who I need to be,
    full of positive and negative energy.
    Full of emotions and feelings that flood in.
    Full of rightousness and sin.
    Sometimes consumed by hate,
    but full of enough love to make the earth quake.
    Thoughts that cloud my brain,
    always moving..again and again.
    I am weak and I am strong,
    sometimes I'm right and sometimes I'm wrong.
    Sometimes I learn from my mistakes.
    Sometimes they are the only thing I know how to make.
    Sometimes I'm steady and sometimes I'm clear,
    sometimes I'm confused and don't want to be here.
    Full of conviction or insecurity,
    so much complication....just to be me.
    But I am who I need to be.
  • I am a sinner
    I am a lover
    I am a peace giver
    I am never a hater
    I am always a lover.....
    I am always a lover.....
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • All about me
    Or,
    The girl who is supposed to be me
    Wants to be, me
    Look, but will you see..?
    Who is she?

    ………………




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    ۞Je houdt niet van haar omdat ze bijzonder is, ze is bijzonder omdat ze van je houdt,
    ۞Liefde is niet dat waarop het uitloopt, maar dat waarmee het begint,
    ۞Er is liefde en je begint een relatie om te zien of zij daartegen bestand is.
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    I am the half friendly smell
    in the stink of your shoe
  • decides2dreamdecides2dream Posts: 14,977
    i am myself
    nothing more
    nothing less
    a pain in the ass
    a terrible mess
    but somehow i still believe in the sum of my parts
    hope the world still does too
    i will keep on dreaming...
    Stay with me...
    Let's just breathe...


    I am myself like you somehow


  • girls are made of
    sugar and spice
    and everything nice
    well i'm a boy
    and i am full
    of hope and despair
    despair and hope

    there once was a time
    when my glasses were always full
    but now the best i can do
    is half empty and most of the time
    my glasses are just plain empty
    both at the bar and otherwise

    despair that you're not here
    and crushed at the loss
    got a heart that cant seem
    to take a second step away
    but still cant find its way back home

    hope that its not final
    that it'll work out someday
    but someday is sometime
    and sometime is who knows?

    so i'll continue to live
    just how i've been
    on the verge of nothing

    with hope and despair
    despair and hope

    despair but hope
    -one thing to remember, always have a good time, all the time
  • dunkmandunkman Posts: 19,646
    I am stupid, yet elusive
    my thoughts are non-conclusive
    I shit and I breathe
    I spit and I seethe
    I am the father of two
    My love gets me through
    I dream and I cry
    but mostly I
    just laugh
    and smile
    and wonder a while
    about bees and jam
    and enjoy who I am

    :)
    oh scary... 40000 morbidly obese christians wearing fanny packs invading europe is probably the least scariest thing since I watched an edited version of The Care Bears movie in an extremely brightly lit cinema.
  • eMMIeMMI Posts: 6,262
    I'm just me
    love me or hate me
    I'd prefer love

    I ain't gonna change
    not for you
    or for you
    maybe for him
    and especially for me

    I love everything and anything
    and all the things between

    I'm such a stupid cow
    and the best chick in the world
    I'll upset real fast
    but forgive you soon
    I hate so many people
    and love all the others

    I'm so perfect, aren't I?
    "you're so pretty", aww, you'll make me cry
    treat me nice and I'll wash your back
    look at me wrong and I'll eat you alive

    I'm making no sense at all
    maybe I should stop
    but I'll let you know
    before I go
    I'm never gonna stop
    being me
    "Don't be faint-hearted, I have a solution! We shall go and commandeer some small craft, then drift at leisure until we happen upon another ideal place for our waterside supper with riparian entertainments."
  • between the constant chasing of a weary ghost
    and the decisiveness yearned for the most

    lies a neurotic path of self-conscious doubts

    a past that has yet to be discovered
    and relentless present and future ties
    that as we speak though
    refuse to be bothered

    a passionate lack of exuberance yields silent shouts

    between the constant chasing of a weary ghost
    and the decisiveness yearned for the most

    a petty ray of sunlight pierces through the clouds
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    very interesting....
    Its neat to see what everyone has to write....

    Thanks.

    I thank God none of us are serial killers:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • chromiamchromiam Posts: 4,114
    I am me
    its all I know who to be
    sometimes I don't know
    who that even is

    But here and there
    I look and find
    a part which can be
    caring and loving and kind

    For most of all I am
    hoping and wanting and waiting
    this hopeless romantic
    desperately seeking

    trying to find someone
    the one who can be
    by my side
    when I discover me....
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  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    I already posted one a few weeks ago, so i won't repost. it was a thread by me called "faith". Feel free to search if you have the energy or the desire.
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,265
    I was born with the girl next door
    kicking me out



    (I'm a first born twin hahahahaha)
    More to be posted as I decide what to write.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    I was born with the girl next door
    kicking me out



    (I'm a first born twin hahahahaha)
    More to be posted as I decide what to write.


    So I guess I was the one that kicked my sister out. Not enough room I suppose.
  • HenkeHenke Posts: 34
    Every life has a soul
    I am filled with a hole
    An empty shell
    In a cage I dwell

    Time consumes me
    If only I was free
    Purpose is what I need
    Is the answer creed?

    There is no end
    Neither a beginning
    I continue to exist
    Im just like a mist
    Smart is being able to see the obvious
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    Ali wrote:
    very interesting....
    Its neat to see what everyone has to write....

    Thanks.

    I thank God none of us are serial killers:)

    Do you think anyone would really post that if they were?lol
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,265
    I'm someone who just screamed "holy fuck"
    because I found out a friend
    who I haven't talked to in a few years
    has a 1 year old daughter.
    Life is weird, just plain ol weird.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • 20 dollor bills and burnt blastic bags,
    smells of cider in the morning and vodka at night
    a box filled with dead fish and cigars
    piss covered pants to your prom leasure suit,
    used car salesman of the year selling picures of horses,
    the inner aquatic wind at your ears,
    a pretty dasie in a rose bush,
    ice cream snow on christmas morning,
    almost as tall as the floor allows,
    smarter then she thinks....
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    Sometimes i like to walk fast in the cold winters rain
    Sometimes I like to dance fast naked deep down in satans flame
    and sometimes, just sometimes i feel a little tame
    can't help thinking my lifes a stupid shame

    sometimes i smash the pieces when my rage fills and spills
    sometimes i build neatly until the job is done completely
    and sometimes just sometimes i leave the pices lame
    cause i'm not all that bothered about this stupid stupid game

    sometimes i give love not wanting it back
    sometimes i kill love and eat it
    and sometimes, just sometimes i wish i could forget my own name
    can't help but hid ethe fact that i'm the onee to blame

    and sometimes, just sometimes the sun shine comes out to play


    Maybe you should let the sunshine come out to play more often and if you have love to give, why wouldn't you want it back?
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    sorry that was ment to be

    ... she lets my sun shine come round to play

    That's pretty.
  • i am feeling from east to west and north to south
    i care so much last night
    and still never figure it out
    how to say im cold today
    or how i tried to say exactly what i feel
    and now i dont even feel real

    i wanna scream i love you and then show you the wounds
    ive inflincted on others when i was loaded on booze
    i wanna start over with wisdom and loving forever
    i wanna be sinless and share heaven together

    i wanna say jesus saves and muhammed does to
    but i wanna run away before you think im gonna bomb you
    i want to be a little child driven by nature that cares
    and most of all
    i wanna be there with you to talk and to pray and to share
    what prescious family and friends i am blessed to have
    thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    lovin kind wrote:
    i am feeling from east to west and north to south
    i care so much last night
    and still never figure it out
    how to say im cold today
    or how i tried to say exactly what i feel
    and now i dont even feel real

    i wanna scream i love you and then show you the wounds
    ive inflincted on others when i was loaded on booze
    i wanna start over with wisdom and loving forever
    i wanna be sinless and share heaven together

    i wanna say jesus saves and muhammed does to
    but i wanna run away before you think im gonna bomb you
    i want to be a little child driven by nature that cares
    and most of all
    i wanna be there with you to talk and to pray and to share
    what prescious family and friends i am blessed to have


    That is really beautiful.
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    i really am a man,
    who was born in newfoundland,
    i recently traveled far,
    to touch this place i had never known,
    listened to some music,
    and it was there i met so very many wonderful people..

    i hope to meet them all again some day,
    next year is my dream,
    or maybe sooner.

    i am a man who is very fortunate.
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • hmm..

    i look like a witch
    id like to eat a sandwich
    but i cant because id kill it
    just like any of my relationships
    because im a lil bitch

    hmm...damn that took me a while...
    7/10/06
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    hmm..

    i look like a witch
    id like to eat a sandwich
    but i cant because id kill it
    just like any of my relationships
    because im a lil bitch

    hmm...damn that took me a while...

    :) i just assumed from your name that you were a guy
  • monkaymonkay Posts: 40
    Emotionally weak
    Too Sensitive
    Nowhere to fit
    Like a dscarded piece
    Misunderstood
    always

    Too many paths
    I choose to sit still
    To make up my mind
    Is a challenge of will
    So I be still

    I float through life
    Like debris on the ocean
    No direction
    A lost soul
    Just waiting to sink

    Just drifting
    Just drifting
    http://www.myspace.com/funkymonkay

    Please check out my bands website and give some of our song's a listen!!

    http://www.myspace.com/dekolta

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    Reading Festival 2006
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  • pacifier wrote:
    :) i just assumed from your name that you were a guy

    haha..i am..
    7/10/06
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    :D haha, ok well from your poem I thought you were a girl, cos you wrote you look like a witch and called youself a bitch, normally things applied to females. ah well, on here you can be anything
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    I'm a tramp,
    a hooker
    a whore
    Do you want more?
    I'm a slut,
    a wench
    a two-bit bore
    Anybody wanna come over my house and play soccer?


    :)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,265
    I pulled out the swords
    and hid them in my pocket
    ready to defend
    my opinion.

    I believe in ghosts and dreams,
    in particular guardians watching over me.
    If someone pushes my body's limits they are pulled by a
    dead St. Louis policeman or a dead grumpy-ass Italian. (Hi Grandpa/Grandpa!)

    I'm the daughter of an intelligent woman
    and a loud s.o.b.
    A twin of one
    and a sister of many.
    I look at couples and wonder why
    things are as they are when we die.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
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