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Winter

AliAli Posts: 2,621
edited November 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Approaching.
White,clouds of softness,that
you just want to reach out
and touch.
Silver linings on every snowman,
while children play,and say
"Go Away!"
While hot cups of
hot chocolate for the kids
and warm cups of hot tea
await the adults at nightfall,
brandy entrancing.
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005

"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"

PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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Comments

  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    I really like this one. Great mental picture. Thanks for that.
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Thank you twin2.:)
    always looking forward to your read as well...:)
    Have a great weekend!

    allison
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    That was really nice. What a great mental picture and very soothing. Thanks for writing that!
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    You too Ali! I've been more into reading others lately though.

    Ali wrote:
    Thank you twin2.:)
    always looking forward to your read as well...:)
    Have a great weekend!

    allison
  • EvilToasterElfEvilToasterElf Posts: 1,119
    brandy entrancing

    keep that one
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