Love Me or Leave Me (in) Blues For A day in the Key of C

AliAli Posts: 2,621
edited January 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
"Baby,if you love me, then show me that you care"
I miss him
"Don't drift too far Daddy-Stick around so that you'll be near"
I miss watching the deer
"Understanding is something-That makes evrything just fine"
But I don't miss drinking his drinks
"My young and Foolish heart makes me do the things I shouldn't"
I miss him saying,This bed is too small...
"But youre the one objective of..."
But he wouldn't know a woman if she reached out to touch him
"While I speak of love-Remember what I told you..."
What do you expect of a catastrophe arriving on New Years'
"What do you expect of a paper moon?"
He works,I sit.And wait.Entertaining all.





adev
And I even bought new strings for my guitar today to celebrate the eight days of Christmas,,,,,:)
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005

"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"

PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    I.
    Falling in love again...Marlene Deitrich.
    Downstairs to grab a smoke.
    Hanging onto the memory of when
    czars cried.
    And wine was relevant.
    Now to find,
    it means nothing but what
    society portrays as perfect,
    along with the affairs and cheats, and
    illegitimate marriages and
    those poor poor children of mine.
    For dying in vain
    is accountable to nothing,
    and dying in His name,
    and possibly mine,
    means a mystery.

    II.
    Some people just don't get it.
    Once,
    I was engaged.
    I couldn't wait,too long
    after the sex kept coming,
    so I carried my body into chastity.
    Now I sit,
    happier than ever,
    with you on my sleeve,
    for a match to a flame we both are.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • both great, but I really liked the first one. Good idea telling a rythem. I know I will often write something and show it to my mates. Often they are all like mmmeeeehhh, but if I play guitar or even drums, they have a total change in attitude.

    That is actually the only reason I started playing guitar....to give a beat to lyrics. I am not an overly good player, but I do enjoy it.

    I am really rambling here

    bye
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    both great, but I really liked the first one. Good idea telling a rythem. I know I will often write something and show it to my mates. Often they are all like mmmeeeehhh, but if I play guitar or even drums, they have a total change in attitude.

    That is actually the only reason I started playing guitar....to give a beat to lyrics. I am not an overly good player, but I do enjoy it.

    I am really rambling here

    bye
    Thnksa deopop...The mind is a terrible thing to waste,eh?:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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