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AliAli Posts: 2,621
edited March 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Loving you
Til the sky is blue
Need you
Til the peace is done due
Want to run
For the children of the sun
Want to love
On the wings of a dove
Holding my hand,
Forever,
To protect this land,
on the wings of Phoenix.

adev to ejsv:)
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005

"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"

PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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  • 100% pure beautiful words my friend~!
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Ali wrote:
    Loving you
    Til the sky is blue
    Need you
    Til the peace is done due
    Want to run
    For the children of the sun
    Want to love
    On the wings of a dove
    Holding my hand,
    Forever,
    To protect this land,
    on the wings of Phoenix.

    adev to ejsv:)


    I like your poetry better than I like you petition

    For the children of the sun
    I love this line.
    Hope is a good thing maybe the best of things, (Shawshank redemption)
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • lovin kindlovin kind Posts: 268
    saving the world starts somewhere in the beginning of a poem
    and ends in the work of love of peace

    there should be infinite jobs
    thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
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