Vision XVII

Ali

This one was alittle differed..
A wedding dress, fixed,
in a castle.
I couldn't wear the dress,
too colored,
stuck with the black,green,
and white size 12,
I bought a TJ max.
Lee was there,
so was Mandee,
and D &M.
I couldn't go through
with the service,
cause I loved
YOU:D
(Those visions of the dream tent,
and you drawing your pictures,
myself watching,
too real.)
JOn and Vin,
finally popped up
to cheer me on in my
delinquent Sunday vow,
and Mr. Derek JAY,
showed up,miraculously,
with the whole team,
not to wear a hat,
holding up his left arm,
as usual.(God I love that guy
and his sportin'!)
All I can say,
is that a trip to Egypt
and the pyramids would
be stupendous,
but I'll leave that to my love,
Nassar,
and let him rule his castle abroad,
with his palace of gold,and his
turban of white.
The deaths,irrelavant,to those,
and to me,I weep sadly for the blood shed
in this foreign town,and thank God for heaven.
I deeply swim,every night in my bath tub,
debating if I should take the stp-plug out of
the drain;Or if I should put
some bubbles in the tub first.
I took my right to GOd,and asked HIm
if someone loved me,and he said,
nothing.
Just let me back down on the Earth.
For men dying and people lying hurt
the skins like a band-aid,
and crush the mind like a flower withering.
I can only sit and cry about Nassar-missed,
and elope upon my deathbed,
or however the story goes.

ali

FinsburyParkCarrots

I never liked Beat poetry before now. Ali, you are the world's first Good Beat Poet. Really, keep writing those visions down while they're coming. They're good, quirky and made to be spoken aloud, sung, performed as a play, or dreamt.

Ali

FinsburyParkCarrots wrote:

I never liked Beat poetry before now. Ali, you are the world's first Good Beat Poet. Really, keep writing those visions down while they're coming. They're good, quirky and made to be spoken aloud, sung, performed as a play, or dreamt.

Thank you Finns:)I think we are all free, and that in helping my friends,etc,
is quite the thing.NO ONE can persecute you or tell you what to do,in a spiritual sense,whatever religion it may be-that of "God",and what he means to you.I don't think that anyone should die a horrible death, and anyone who does,their capturers should be jailed,BUT the innocence needs to be protected and they should not mingle with death and evil-it will only come back to them.If that is a Beat Poet,I guess that IS what I am,and I sincerely
thank you for your compliment.:)

FinsburyParkCarrots

My pleasure. And now, with the UK time at 4.09am, I'd better hit the sack.


I expect to see more poetry when I wake up in four hours' time.

Being Enlightened

Your poetry always intrigues me, Ali. You're very sweet and compassionate.

Ali

FinsburyParkCarrots wrote:

My pleasure. And now, with the UK time at 4.09am, I'd better hit the sack.


I expect to see more poetry when I wake up in four hours' time.

Yea,well.....enjoy your times...all good....:)