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AliAli Posts: 2,621
edited September 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
he appeared in a white gown.
like the one Jesus wore
during His ressurection.
He looked at me,with love,
just as he would on Earth,
with clouds around him,
bare feet?
Then he spoke to the group of us,
circled in front of him with the man
behind his right shoulder,
dressed in the same fashion....,
"Which one of you murdered me?"

I blinked and walked away,
out of Heaven for the day.
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005

"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"

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  • Pearl_Jam_NecklacePearl_Jam_Necklace Posts: 501
    i love this ...are you also ali ..being enlightened? beautiful poem..thankyou for sharing it.
    ...It's only after disaster that we can be resurrected...
    it's only after you've lost everything ...that you are free to do anything....(Fight Club)

    ... I'll ride the wave...where it takes me....
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Pearl_Jam_Necklace wrote:
    i love this ...are you also ali ..being enlightened? beautiful poem..thankyou for sharing it.
    PJN..THANK YOU,PJN,...I AM BEING ENLIGHTENED EVRYDAY AS WELL....
    BEEN FOLLOWING THE VISIONS AND SUCH....THAT GOD AND JESUS GIVE...
    FILLING MY LIFE WITH IT.HOPE YOU HAVE A GREAT DAY...


    ALLISON
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Pearl_Jam_Necklace wrote:
    i love this ...are you also ali ..being enlightened? beautiful poem..thankyou for sharing it.

    Hey, PJN, we're both named Allison but we're not the same person. :)

    Still reading your works as promised though, Ali. :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Being Enlightened wrote:
    Hey, PJN, we're both named Allison but we're not the same person. :)

    Still reading your works as promised though, Ali. :)
    i hope so be,...

    hope youre being a gud girl....

    je veux hockey et J' aime le Flyers et le new jersey team!
    vien a jersey!
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • kdpjamkdpjam Posts: 2,303
    Ali wrote:
    he appeared in a white gown.
    like the one Jesus wore
    during His ressurection.
    He looked at me,with love,
    just as he would on Earth,
    with clouds around him,
    bare feet?
    Then he spoke to the group of us,
    circled in front of him with the man
    behind his right shoulder,
    dressed in the same fashion....,
    "Which one of you murdered me?"

    I blinked and walked away,
    out of Heaven for the day.


    ali, you're a star ;)
    lay down all thoughts; surrender to the void
    ~it is shining it is shining~
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    kdpjam wrote:
    ali, you're a star ;)
    Youre too sweet,kd,
    and will always be like a sister to me:). .
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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