You Gave Me Love

AliAli Posts: 2,621
You bore me.
You held me.
You loved me at the same time.
You washed away my tears on a white unbloodied cloth.
You watched me die and come back to life when they had my death in their hands.
You watched me try to seek revenge,
realizing I could never go to it.

A fire by the bay
and a radio tune to carry
decibles of electric sound
to the masses in morse code.
I heard the dolphins cry for me
as I woke awake and in the early morning
to see them swim to keep the shore in their sonaric beat.
I heard you die from miles away and cried for three years straight,
while the children played in heaven with the angels in God's safety.
I can't go to worship in the house,but I can sure worship in the light of the son.

cadev
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005

"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"

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Comments

  • Ali wrote:
    I heard you die from miles away and cried for three years straight,
    while the children played in heaven with the angels in God's safety.
    I can't go to worship in the house,but I can sure worship in the light of the son.

    Very nice.

    Reminds me of the little Native American poetry I've read - exaggerations, but at the same time...perfectly fitting.

    Thanks.
    Teamwork. Rawk. Pwnage. Infinite Possibilities. YIELD. Hells yeah.
  • Bu2Bu2 Posts: 1,693
    Thank you for sharing it. I took the time to read it slowly, twice. Very nice.
    Feels Good Inc.
  • Holey GhostHoley Ghost Posts: 744
    very nce Ali! I really enjoyed it.
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
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