Two for one
Chuck U Mann
Posts: 25
Apathy
Romantics
Leave this world alone
Its has grown cold straight to the bone
Dreamer
You have no chance
There will be no dance
Feel with your heart
Expect to be torn apart
Piece it back together
Turn it around
See it all crumble to the ground
Watch in pain
as your tears are in vain
You can grit your teeth
Grind them to an ache
Scream for their souls
as laughter echoes in your face
You are not needed or wanted
The angels and saints
Have all been murdered
all their energy
all they aspired too
all that they have given us
Buried in a shallow unmarked grave
Forgotten by time
R.L.G.
Fade
Dim
Burning out before my time
A wasting life
I weaken at ever passing day
Exist only in an abyss, and nothing else
I decline to answer for my decay
R.L.G.
Romantics
Leave this world alone
Its has grown cold straight to the bone
Dreamer
You have no chance
There will be no dance
Feel with your heart
Expect to be torn apart
Piece it back together
Turn it around
See it all crumble to the ground
Watch in pain
as your tears are in vain
You can grit your teeth
Grind them to an ache
Scream for their souls
as laughter echoes in your face
You are not needed or wanted
The angels and saints
Have all been murdered
all their energy
all they aspired too
all that they have given us
Buried in a shallow unmarked grave
Forgotten by time
R.L.G.
Fade
Dim
Burning out before my time
A wasting life
I weaken at ever passing day
Exist only in an abyss, and nothing else
I decline to answer for my decay
R.L.G.
You know you are in trouble when you start to buy your own bullshit.
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I'm not sure "Apathy" is a fitting title for the first one, simply because you express some rather strong emotions against these things, whereas apathy would just not care. Just my two cents on that one, though.
I really like the line "I decline to answer for my decay". Very... defeatist, in a creative way.
Chuck
Yah man... didn't mean to diss or anything. In the scheme of your writing, my opinion is dirt.