Touch

Placid BluePlacid Blue Posts: 31
edited December 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I watch you in these familiar surroundings

I do not want to remove my eyes from you

I am taken over by your beauty



Your voice fills the air

Your constant stare is invigorating

You dance and sing in all

Your glorious ways



I feel a strong connection with you

It seems you could somehow be sending me

A secret sign



I stared at you across a large room

You didn't see me standing there

Your time was occupied

I hope that somehow you could feel me



I nearly felt your heart when

I place my hand on your chest

You are soft to the touch

Your beauty has taken over my memories
"If you were waiting for us, than we were waiting for you" E. Vedder 10-3-05

He who forgets will be destined to remember.
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    and to that my dear..
    I have this....

    I walk to him,
    in a dream recaptured by a faded memory
    once held in the heart of
    the meaning of
    Love.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

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  • Originally posted by Ali
    and to that my dear..
    I have this....

    I walk to him,
    in a dream recaptured by a faded memory
    once held in the heart of
    the meaning of
    Love.

    Wow Ali that's amazing and so fitting. It reminds me of something else I wrote similiar to your words. I write this poetry for a very special man. I think in my poem it's obvious that the man is a singer.
    "If you were waiting for us, than we were waiting for you" E. Vedder 10-3-05

    He who forgets will be destined to remember.
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Do you think?
    I usually write about nature..not much inspired by love...I haven't met "him" yet...Kudos to you my friend....
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • Originally posted by Ali
    Do you think?
    I usually write about nature..not much inspired by love...I haven't met "him" yet...Kudos to you my friend....

    Thank you.
    "If you were waiting for us, than we were waiting for you" E. Vedder 10-3-05

    He who forgets will be destined to remember.
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Anytime placid blue....

    Let's always provoke thought,
    encourage creativity..
    in art.?.?.?
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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