Inspired by Improv from 4-12-03 Show-False Hood

satsumafutantsatsumafutant Posts: 4
edited September 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
False hood,
no good,
controls all so you don't see,
but your fear,
it rapes me,
rapes me,
traps me into a place I don't want to be.

Your fear,
it runs deep,
it even traps you,
in your sleep
and now it's crushed
my heart,
torn us apart.

Don't speak
cuz I don't care,
before now you didn't
even know I was there,
when I touched your face....

Now you want to put me in my place?

After all I've done,
showed you I was fortunate,
that I thought you could truly be the one....

What do you want from me?

If I cut my heart out, would you see?

That this was all just a big dream,
you needed a place to blow steam.

Now you tear,
your share,
that's quite enough,
that's enough now,
just let me be
just let me be....
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Comments

  • heartbreak sux, yo. I feel ya.
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  • thanks grooveamatic.....also, for anyone else who reads this, I had a certain event that occurred in my head, the 'Improv' set off the rhyme/rhythm and the ability to configure everything, it cleared my head..kinda..sorta....you know what I mean?
  • i know what you mean...yea...

    thanks for sharing this.
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • Originally posted by satsumafutant
    thanks grooveamatic.....also, for anyone else who reads this, I had a certain event that occurred in my head, the 'Improv' set off the rhyme/rhythm and the ability to configure everything, it cleared my head..kinda..sorta....you know what I mean?


    Since I can't edit my other post, I just wanted to say that what I meant was that..like, I didn't write this based on what Eddie was sayin' because, well, the lyrics are quite positive for what I wrote..so..yeah..ok..continue what you were doing...
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