dont wanna think... just wanna feel

catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
edited October 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
she wandered into the wild
shed been out there before
she only hesitated for a second
then thought fuck it,this is what life is for
the trees around her grew dense
the light began to fade
one step in front of the other
she breathed deeply and silently prayed
she was smart enough she knew
but was she smart enough to stop
she had seen the end of paths like this
and everytime it mattered less
she couldnt pretend to be guarded
and her cautious steps turned into long strides
through the heather staggering
celtic whispers on the rise
hear my name
take a good look
this could be the day
hold my hand
lie beside me
i just need to say
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  • nice work, i can really connect with this one, it's what i feel everytime i set off to go backpacking in the backcountry alone, and sometimes even when i go with friends, although to a lesser degree.
    "Ah, life is a gate, a way, a path to Paradise anyway, why not live for fun and joy and love or some sort of girl by a fireside, why not go to your desire and LAUGH..."
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