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and in kind i shall give

catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
edited October 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
when i heard what you said
i thought i would truly die
all the time we spent together
ends up in a pile
bad chosen words coated in sugar
blew it all out of the water
i thought that you loved me
i believed everything that you said
especially when you said those words to me
i laid myself bare for you and you lied
the time we shared has come to mean nothing
and the screaming in my head drowns out all my sense
right now i wish what was said could be denied
that the lies youre revealing now were the truth
but you stood right in front of me and told me it was true
you used me and threw me away like a rag
and you said it all with some perverted pride
when i heard what you said
i thought i would truly die
but now my anger has become my greatest weapon
and youve given me a gift i will never ever lose sight of
hear my name
take a good look
this could be the day
hold my hand
lie beside me
i just need to say
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  • CHANGEinWAVESCHANGEinWAVES Posts: 10,169
    Wow...u took the thoughts outta my head and the feelings outta my heart.
    Nicely written:)
    "I'm not present, I'm a drug that makes you dream"
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    sinsensesesscenicicsensesethicate :D
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    but i did not intend to leave a space in my post but since there is no edit button i cannot change it so i post again .. hi .. :)
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    olderman wrote:
    sinsensesesscenicicsensesethicate :D

    sounds like the gin talking j. ;):p:D
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
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