holding unsteady

catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
edited August 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
angry
irritable
not quite sure
what is it im feeling?
so many voices in my head
are they just deceiving?
i dont know
i wish i did
but somethings got to give
i cant go through what i did before
is that sound you hear, me leaving?
perhaps
maybe
is this feeling inside me still grieving?
i just dont know
but i will say this
you have to be sure in your steps
you know i always was
im still like that you have to know
even more so when ive lost all my dreaming
hear my name
take a good look
this could be the day
hold my hand
lie beside me
i just need to say
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  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    angry
    irritable
    not quite sure
    what is it that im feeling?
    so many voices in my head
    are they just deceiving?
    i dont know
    i wish i did
    but somethings got to give
    i cant go through what i did before
    is that sound you hear, me leaving?
    perhaps
    maybe
    i wish i knew
    is this feeling inside me still grieving?
    i just dont know
    think you can help?
    tell me all your thinking
    i will say this though
    itll come as no surprise
    you have to be sure in your steps
    you know i always was
    im still like that you not much has changed
    even moreso when ive lost all my dreaming
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • CHANGEinWAVESCHANGEinWAVES Posts: 10,169
    i'm really starting to think you've been in my head lately.
    again...i really like this one, thank you for posting.
    "I'm not present, I'm a drug that makes you dream"
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    well im not sure im even in my own head right now, so tis possible. :)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • CHANGEinWAVESCHANGEinWAVES Posts: 10,169
    well im not sure im even in my own head right now, so tis possible. :)
    again, i can relate to that.
    trust me...ur welcome in my head more so then my own thoughts at this point.
    "I'm not present, I'm a drug that makes you dream"
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