dead calm

catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
edited November 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
was it real
or was i just dreaming
a breeze brushed by me
and i felt him there
we danced and touched
and said our piece
but was it real
or an insane dream
i breathed him cautiously
and now it seems im choking
on what could have been
cause i dont know, now he's gone
the silence breaks me down
into parts to be lonely, confused
and a lack of grace most unbecoming
my patience tested... waiting... waiting
endless thoughts strangling me
am i assuming things not evident
am i a fool to dance along the edge
i felt the breeze i know i did
now all i feel is a dead calm
hear my name
take a good look
this could be the day
hold my hand
lie beside me
i just need to say
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  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    was it real
    or was i just dreaming
    a breeze brushed by me
    and i felt him there
    we danced and touched
    and said our piece
    but was it real
    or an insane dream
    i breathed him cautiously
    and now it seems im choking
    on what could have been
    cause i dont know, now he's gone
    the silence breaks me down
    into parts to be lonely, confused
    and a lack of grace most unbecoming
    my patience tested... waiting... waiting
    endless thoughts strangling me
    am i assuming things not evident
    am i a fool to dance along the edge
    i felt the breeze i know i did
    now all i feel is a dead calm

    cate-ster.
    as of lately you been writing/posting about this edge you dance along.
    i was thinking after reading "the edge" and
    then now this one,
    i am thinking to myself what would happen if she jumped?
    to take the big plunge into the hearts abyss.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    chadwick wrote:
    cate-ster.
    as of lately you been writing/posting about this edge you dance along.
    i was thinking after reading "the edge" and
    then now this one,
    i am thinking to myself what would happen if she jumped?
    to take the big plunge into the hearts abyss.

    she already has.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • very interesting
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
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