sunday morning thought #1

catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
edited September 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
she finds it difficult to work life out
too many thoughts go 'round in her mind
and the weight just crushes her soul
she knows she is pushing too hard
for something she knows can never be
she tries she wonders and realises tis not her place
their definitions disparate and it's time to let go
she'll let it slide and hopes he fades away
no she doesn't yes she does
all she knows is he doesn't know her basic need
too many thoughts a crushing weight
it's time to leave before tis too late
hear my name
take a good look
this could be the day
hold my hand
lie beside me
i just need to say
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  • jamie ukjamie uk Posts: 3,812
    Evocative as ever Cate.
    Here's my Sunday morning poem....


    Can I wake,
    do I think I should?
    I feel so drained,
    do I think I could,
    stand up straight,
    without a hood?
    The reason you see,
    is plainly stood,
    I'm weakened,..
    ..by this morning wood!!


    I thank you.
    I came, I saw, I concurred.....
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