influence

catefrances

he held the pregnant moon in his hands just to see her face more clearly
when she looked up and smiled at him his night turned to day and he was gone
she reached out and touched her hand to his skin and he forgot everything he knew
his mind danced and his heart fell and regained its purchase and then he remembered
twas she that was the full moon in his sky, the stars that lit his night
she was the axis his world revolved upon
he released the moon and simply fell into her
she took him to her and for the briefest of moments he thought his world held still.

chadwick

catefrances wrote:

he held the pregnant moon in his hands just to see her face more clearly
when she looked up and smiled at him his night turned to day and he was gone
she reached out and touched her hand to his skin and he forgot everything he knew
his mind danced and his heart fell and regained its purchase and then he remembered
twas she that was the full moon in his sky, the stars that lit his night
she was the axis his world revolved upon
he released the moon and simply fell into her
she took him to her and for the briefest of moments he thought his world held still.

Cate-ster's writing takes a turn.

catefrances

chadwick wrote:

Cate-ster's writing takes a turn.

more a swerve to avoid a collision rather than a turn.