excuse me mr keats

catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
edited October 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
pretty thing on
butterfly wings
beating vainly in a void
lamenting loss the heavens rain
upon broken souls divided
is beauty a joy?
is it truly forever?
or shall it too, with time
pass into
nothingness?
hear my name
take a good look
this could be the day
hold my hand
lie beside me
i just need to say
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  • jboelhowjboelhow Posts: 170
    Intense. I like the argument against beauty that the poem brings, simple yet direct and powerful.
    Live the life you dream

    "Cause I can't wait to figure out what's wrong with me
    So I can say this is the way I use to be" -- John Mayer
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