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misery me

catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
edited April 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
misery loves company
and what's that they say
about missing someone
even when they're sitting
right next to you.
so having you by my side
isn't curing this loneliness
i'm feeling
i used to think that
you were the cure
for whatever was ailing me
you'd come sit by my side
and everything would work out alright
but now you just burn
up all the oxygen in the room
and i can't breath to save myself
i'm feeling more alone
with you by my side
than i ever have before
there is no spark
to catch
to warm my cold heart
misery loves company
but i'm not loving yours
hear my name
take a good look
this could be the day
hold my hand
lie beside me
i just need to say
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  • clifford_1972clifford_1972 Posts: 113
    catefrances wrote:
    misery loves company
    and what's that they say
    about missing someone
    even when they're sitting
    right next to you.
    so having you by my side
    isn't curing this loneliness
    i'm feeling
    i used to think that
    you were the cure
    for whatever was ailing me
    you'd come sit by my side
    and everything would work out alright
    but now you just burn
    up all the oxygen in the room
    and i can't breath to save myself
    i'm feeling more alone
    with you by my side
    than i ever have before
    there is no spark
    to catch
    to warm my cold heart
    misery loves company
    but i'm not loving yours

    maybe you sucked that person dry and they have nothing to give you because you drained them?maybe you were needy and clingy and maybe that person attracted you with their bright light and you sought to seek out like a moth that brilliant light but you take and take and when you never give back what do you expect?this sounds whiny and pathetic to me.get a steel hard fidora and move the fuck on.
    "When a man lies,He murders some part of the world
    These are the pale deaths which men miscall their lives,All this I cannot bear to witness any longer,
    Cannot the kingdom of salvation,Take me home!"
    Cliff Burton R.I.PFebruary 10, 1962 – September 27, 1986
  • likepilateihaveadoglikepilateihaveadog Posts: 1,083
    well, I don't know about the previous comment.
    but I know the feeling.
    I think...in some way.


    thanks.
    Teamwork. Rawk. Pwnage. Infinite Possibilities. YIELD. Hells yeah.
  • clifford_1972clifford_1972 Posts: 113
    likepilateihaveadog wrote:
    well, I don't know about the previous comment.
    but I know the feeling.
    I think...in some way.


    thanks.

    maybe you should both be better people and try to be better in giving in relationships.you'll end up alone and dying all by yourself."you'll end up alone like you began"
    "When a man lies,He murders some part of the world
    These are the pale deaths which men miscall their lives,All this I cannot bear to witness any longer,
    Cannot the kingdom of salvation,Take me home!"
    Cliff Burton R.I.PFebruary 10, 1962 – September 27, 1986
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    clifford_1972 wrote:
    maybe you sucked that person dry and they have nothing to give you because you drained them?maybe you were needy and clingy and maybe that person attracted you with their bright light and you sought to seek out like a moth that brilliant light but you take and take and when you never give back what do you expect?this sounds whiny and pathetic to me.get a steel hard fidora and move the fuck on.

    maybe i did suck that person dry. you could bet that i was needy and clingy and just took and took and took til there was nothing left to take. maybe that's what i do. maybe i am a vampire that seeks out soft targets and uses them only until they have it to give me. maybe i'm a black hole sucking all the energy to me. maybe if i don't move on i will kill you.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • likepilateihaveadoglikepilateihaveadog Posts: 1,083
    catefrances wrote:
    maybe if i don't move on i will kill you.
    oh, that's too good

    ;)
    Teamwork. Rawk. Pwnage. Infinite Possibilities. YIELD. Hells yeah.
  • clifford_1972clifford_1972 Posts: 113
    catefrances wrote:
    maybe i did suck that person dry. you could bet that i was needy and clingy and just took and took and took til there was nothing left to take. maybe that's what i do. maybe i am a vampire that seeks out soft targets and uses them only until they have it to give me. maybe i'm a black hole sucking all the energy to me. maybe if i don't move on i will kill you.

    awesome!i love death threats!i knew you were a bloodsucker!only thing you are unaware of is the strength of your victim.you have been the victim all along of a plan hatched long before you said hello.
    "When a man lies,He murders some part of the world
    These are the pale deaths which men miscall their lives,All this I cannot bear to witness any longer,
    Cannot the kingdom of salvation,Take me home!"
    Cliff Burton R.I.PFebruary 10, 1962 – September 27, 1986
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    clifford_1972 wrote:
    awesome!i love death threats!i knew you were a bloodsucker!only thing you are unaware of is the strength of your victim.you have been the victim all along of a plan hatched long before you said hello.


    a threat? you think it's a threat? i don't make threats baby. nor do i make promises. i do what i do and i don't look back. i never under estimate my victim. i have learnt to choose wisely. but they frequently under estimate me. of course by then it's too late. i saw what i wanted. i took it and i left them licking their wounds.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • imspinninimspinnin Posts: 933
    clifford_1972 wrote:
    maybe you sucked that person dry and they have nothing to give you because you drained them?maybe you were needy and clingy and maybe that person attracted you with their bright light and you sought to seek out like a moth that brilliant light but you take and take and when you never give back what do you expect?this sounds whiny and pathetic to me.get a steel hard fidora and move the fuck on.
    I liked the poem and can relate in a strong way...I don't believe it's sucking the person dry. Maybe that person has developed a hard shell for whatever reasons and isn't letting you in.
    If I could be anything in the world I would be your teardrop...I would be born in your eyes, live on your cheeks, and die on your lips.
  • imspinninimspinnin Posts: 933
    catefrances wrote:
    misery loves company
    and what's that they say
    about missing someone
    even when they're sitting
    right next to you.
    so having you by my side
    isn't curing this loneliness
    i'm feeling
    i used to think that
    you were the cure
    for whatever was ailing me
    you'd come sit by my side
    and everything would work out alright
    but now you just burn
    up all the oxygen in the room
    and i can't breath to save myself
    i'm feeling more alone
    with you by my side
    than i ever have before
    there is no spark
    to catch
    to warm my cold heart
    misery loves company
    but i'm not loving yours
    I like it and it speaks many truths!!! Well Done:)
    If I could be anything in the world I would be your teardrop...I would be born in your eyes, live on your cheeks, and die on your lips.
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    i used to live with a black hole, of sorts. they sucked, but i was willing to give, so... i did. and it didn't help, in the long run. them or me. it didn't help.

    i'm discovering that the only person who's going to take care of you is you, and that anyone who wants you to take care of them is just empty, and looking for all the wrong filling. cuz, even if you give them your all, they're still empty... love isn't food, though it'll stave off hunger.

    if you genuinely care for this person, pretend you don't. and keep pretending until they start acting like they care about YOU, too.
    tell them the balls to the wall truth about how you feel
    go out and do stuff that makes you happy, and make them either get a shrink, or a life, whichever's easier



    good luck
    Rachel



    ps... clifford. why you gotta be a dick? just because they're sitting next to someone and it's doing nothing for them doesn't mean they sucked the life out of anything. pretty arrogant assumption on your part if you ask me. maybe that happened to you... but don't pin that shit on some sitch you don't know. how fast asleep can you get?
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