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three word lies.

catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
edited April 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
you know
when i said that i loved you
i wanted you to believe it
when i said that i loved you
i didn't really mean it
i just wanted to own you
i wanted your soul
i wanted your body
all your self control.

you know
when i said that i loved you
it wasn't the truth
when i said that i loved you
it was just an excuse
i didn't really mean it
i doubt i ever could
when i said that i loved you
you misunderstood

now don't you go crying
now don't you get mad
it just ain't my problem
you're stupid enough to be had
so go tell your mamma
cause i just don't care
it just ain't my problem
that your head's full of air

you call me a bitch
well i guess that i am
but i never promised
all i did was demand
that you give it to me
everything that you had

do you want it all back?
i guess i could try
the knife in my hand
as i wave you goodbye
'fuck you', you say
well that's just not nice
i 'spose i deserved it
click your heels three times

there's no place like home
there's no place like home
there's no place like home
see you later
i'm gone.
hear my name
take a good look
this could be the day
hold my hand
lie beside me
i just need to say
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  • clifford_1972clifford_1972 Posts: 113
    catefrances wrote:
    you know
    when i said that i loved you
    i wanted you to believe it
    when i said that i loved you
    i didn't really mean it
    i just wanted to own you
    i wanted your soul
    i wanted your body
    all your self control.

    you know
    when i said that i loved you
    it wasn't the truth
    when i said that i loved you
    it was just an excuse
    i didn't really mean it
    i doubt i ever could
    when i said that i loved you
    you misunderstood

    now don't you go crying
    now don't you get mad
    it just ain't my problem
    you're stupid enough to be had
    so go tell your mamma
    cause i just don't care
    it just ain't my problem
    that your head's full of air

    you call me a bitch
    well i guess that i am
    but i never promised
    all i did was demand
    that you give it to me
    everything that you had

    do you want it all back?
    i guess i could try
    the knife in my hand
    as i wave you goodbye
    'fuck you', you say
    well that's just not nice
    i 'spose i deserved it
    click your heels three times

    there's no place like home
    there's no place like home
    there's no place like home
    see you later
    i'm gone.

    this poem is simply dispicable! u would be proud of this treatment of another human being wouldn't u? u give the pure of heart a bad name and cause so much pain... Karma's a bitch... bigger than the one u claim to be... it'll all catch up to u... always does!
    "When a man lies,He murders some part of the world
    These are the pale deaths which men miscall their lives,All this I cannot bear to witness any longer,
    Cannot the kingdom of salvation,Take me home!"
    Cliff Burton R.I.PFebruary 10, 1962 – September 27, 1986
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    i'm a writer clifford. if i think it, i write it. i can't help what i think. besides how is it that you are under the impression that everything i write is from personal experience. not everything i write any amount of truth to it?

    by the way, it may or may not interest you to know that it was you that put me in the bad mood i was in when i wrote that.
    so for that i thank you, my muse. same with angry ant.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • clifford_1972clifford_1972 Posts: 113
    catefrances wrote:
    i'm a writer clifford. if i think it, i write it. i can't help what i think. besides how is it that you are under the impression that everything i write is from personal experience. not everything i write any amount of truth to it?

    by the way, it may or may not interest you to know that it was you that put me in the bad mood i was in when i wrote that.
    so for that i thank you, my muse. same with angry ant.


    aww... the fact that i had such an impact on you is flattering :P i'm a writer too catefrances & not all i write is personal experience either... i write what i see.. what i know... what i don't know... how i perceive walking in another's shoes... i'm amused to be your muse :P
    "When a man lies,He murders some part of the world
    These are the pale deaths which men miscall their lives,All this I cannot bear to witness any longer,
    Cannot the kingdom of salvation,Take me home!"
    Cliff Burton R.I.PFebruary 10, 1962 – September 27, 1986
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    inspiration comes from the most innocuous things sometimes.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • clifford_1972clifford_1972 Posts: 113
    catefrances wrote:
    inspiration comes from the most innocuous things sometimes.


    have you been drinking?
    "When a man lies,He murders some part of the world
    These are the pale deaths which men miscall their lives,All this I cannot bear to witness any longer,
    Cannot the kingdom of salvation,Take me home!"
    Cliff Burton R.I.PFebruary 10, 1962 – September 27, 1986
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    it's not even noon here. but no i haven't been drinking. have you?
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • clifford_1972clifford_1972 Posts: 113
    catefrances wrote:
    it's not even noon here. but no i haven't been drinking. have you?

    off the wagon ;p
    "When a man lies,He murders some part of the world
    These are the pale deaths which men miscall their lives,All this I cannot bear to witness any longer,
    Cannot the kingdom of salvation,Take me home!"
    Cliff Burton R.I.PFebruary 10, 1962 – September 27, 1986
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    tchaliz wrote:
    Isn
    ?

    huh?????????
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
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