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october 10.

catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
edited October 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
into thin air
i'd disappear.
the light that shone
would extinguish
as though
a last dying breath.
my love
he would lay
upon my breast
and know that
my death and life
are one and the same.
he'd discover something
not really being
staring down upon
my brow so still
by consequence
not deliberation
to exist.
something perhaps
unimaginable
drifting too far
away from its centre
from where he should
lay down his soul
among the ruins
of love lost
but not wasted.
hear my name
take a good look
this could be the day
hold my hand
lie beside me
i just need to say
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  • kdpjamkdpjam Posts: 2,303
    catefrances wrote:
    into thin air
    i'd disappear.
    the light that shone
    would extinguish
    as though
    a last dying breath.
    my love
    he would lay
    upon my breast
    and know that
    my death and life
    are one and the same.
    he'd discover something
    not really being
    staring down upon
    my brow so still
    by consequence
    not deliberation
    to exist.
    something perhaps
    unimaginable
    drifting too far
    away from its centre
    from where he should
    lay down his soul
    among the ruins
    of love lost
    but not wasted.

    wow. this is more than outstanding!
    lay down all thoughts; surrender to the void
    ~it is shining it is shining~
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