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..... inside

catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
edited February 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
sshhh..... can you hear that?
silence is violence
and nothing's resolved
i sit inside my mind
as my sanity dissolves
i listen as thoughts scream
in my head with no real release
i use it all
to find some kind of peace
sshhh..... can you hear that?
violence is death
and it's at my own hand.
hear my name
take a good look
this could be the day
hold my hand
lie beside me
i just need to say
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  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    sshhh..... can you hear that?
    silence is violence
    and nothing's resolved
    i sit inside my mind
    as my sanity dissolves
    i listen as thoughts scream
    in my head with no real release
    i use it all
    to find some kind of peace
    sshhh..... can you hear that?
    silence is death
    and it's at my own hand.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • reachdown12reachdown12 Posts: 693
    I love it, its short but informative enough to create an image in the mind right from the get go. I like the emphasis and truth spoken.
    "Everyone wants to be the sun that lights up your life, but I'd rather be your moon so I can shine on you during your darkest hour when your sun's not around."
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