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always on my mind

catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
edited January 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i hear a voice quietly calling
over and over again
come with me, come with me, come with me now.
i turn to look but i already know
i am alone as i always am
but still i hear it calling quietly
and it's a voice that makes me cry.
hear my name
take a good look
this could be the day
hold my hand
lie beside me
i just need to say
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    :(
    &&&&&&&&&&&&&&
  • BuruBuru Posts: 8,473
    catefrances wrote:
    i hear a voice quietly calling
    over and over again
    come with me, come with me, come with me now.
    i turn to look but i already know
    i am alone as i always am
    but still i hear it calling quietly
    and it's a voice that makes me cry.

    Sad.
    Really like the last line.
    y la banda de Guille... cuando toca?
  • geniegenie Posts: 2,222
    catefrances wrote:
    i hear a voice quietly calling
    over and over again
    come with me, come with me, come with me now.
    i turn to look but i already know
    i am alone as i always am
    but still i hear it calling quietly
    and it's a voice that makes me cry.

    sad lyrics, i like it :)
    when i read this poem i get the picture that it might be about someone you long for, someone who could be dead
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