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31/1/07

catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
edited January 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
they lay in each other's arms
comforted by the lies that keep them warm
he keeps secrets but she never asks
cause she covets her own
wanting to give it all
but not wanting to lose control
he feels every breath she takes
and wonders how he can steal them
she gives him all he wasn't getting
but still it's not enough
the one thing she has in her possession
is the one thing he wants as his own
and when she asks he answers with a smile.
hear my name
take a good look
this could be the day
hold my hand
lie beside me
i just need to say
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  • Last ExodusLast Exodus Posts: 782
    catefrances wrote:
    they lay in each other's arms
    comforted by the lies that keep them warm
    he keeps secrets but she never asks
    cause she covets her own
    wanting to give it all
    but not wanting to lose control
    he feels every breath she takes
    and wonders how he can steal them
    she gives him all he wasn't getting
    but still it's not enough
    the one thing she has in her possession
    is the one thing he wants as his own
    and when she asks he answers with a smile.
    Pretty good there Cf. Who knew?
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    I really like this one.
    There's something about this line...
    "cause she covets her own"
    that doesn't quite sound as good as the rest, that line could be dropped and it would still be brilliant.
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