shut down

catefrances

ShUt uP!
Y
wOnT
U
listen 2
ME
sHut Up
ShuT
uP
sHUt UP
Y
cAnt U
heAr mE
i
cAn NoT
heAr
the thoughts inside my head but i know they flow through me cause i can feel them.
i watch you through closed eyelids and sense that U can't see me. that you don't want to know me.
if you touched me would i be real or would the image fade into nothingness
Do You wAnt to touCh mE?
i can touch me
i can run my hand over my skin
and even
inside myself. can U do that?
2 me
to you
comE to Me
come On, doNt bE shy
what r u afRaId of?
mE?
Y
i kNow yoU
iS tHat Y?
Do I scaRe yoU?
knoWiNg as u do
that i kNow u
that U caNt hIde from mE
coMe oN pRetTY boY
coMe 2 Me
anD LIe
in
my aRms.
i WiLL lOvE U
i will hURt yOu
i will GiVe U
wHat u wAnt
teLL me
wHAt It Is U waNt
i wiLL sLip it insiDe my scaRs
anD HoLD iT sACred
cloSE to My cOaL heARt
WHAT!?
sssssshhhHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
SHUT UP!!
NO!
yOu sHut Up
Y?
cAnt U hEaR mE
sEe mE
tOUch Me
FeeL ME
HEY!
SHUT Up!
no
.NWOD TUHS

Jamal

Love it Cate, absolutely love it
very brave of you to write/type in that form
most people stick to their rhymes

Good job !

eMMI

that was interestig. a very nice and different read.

I'm gonna read it over again later and I'm sure I'll like it even more then.

red mozzie

eMMI wrote:

that was interestig. a very nice and different read.

.. i agree¡
really like how you presented this one catefrances¡

keep on rockin'