lightening strike

catefrances

hold my hand
let me go
watch me fall
i'm all alone

i thought
i thought
i didn't think
reaching out
cut the string

watch me drain
away to dust
i thought
i thought
i thought too much

too much pressure
much too soon
what was i doing?
i thought i knew

today i heard
a hard hard truth
self delusion
here's the proof

stay away
don't come too close
given time
learn to cope

lightening strikes
my cold dead heart
reignited
it stops it starts

i held your hand
you let you go
feel like a fool
oh yeah, i know

buried below
my own self pity
finding solace
feeling oh so not so pretty.

catefrances

catefrances wrote:

hold my hand
let me go
watch me fall
i'm all alone

i thought
i thought
i didn't think
reaching out
cut the string

watch me drain
away to dust
i thought
i thought
i thought too much

too much pressure
much too soon
what was i doing?
i thought i knew

today i heard
a hard hard truth
self delusion
here's the proof

stay away
don't come too close
given time
learn to cope

lightning strikes
my cold dead heart
reignited
it stops it starts

i held your hand
you let meyou go
feel like a fool
oh yeah, i know

buried below
my own self pity
finding solace
feeling oh so not so pretty.

yeah that's how that line should go. not to mention i spelled lightning incorrectly. that's twice this week.must be having a bad week. :(

catefrances

catefrances wrote:

yeah that's how that line should go.

and yeah it'd be somewhat perfect if i remembered to edit out the word 'you'. not much good with the thinking thing lately.

Perceptual

One of the better ones I've seen on here. Good. Do more.